Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information Others think access to much information creates problems Which view do you agree with Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Internet today has information regarding every topic. Be it Wikipedia, that has replaced old books or the Youtube that has become a platform with numerous 'Do it yourself videos' to everyone novel ideas and skills. The prompt introduces a debate on whether access to excess information on the internet is good or bad for people. I think that the information obtained from internet is very useful and even if it is in excess; does not mean we can't control it. I believe the benefits of information obtained from the internet overweight the disadvantages because of the following three reasons.
Firstly, almost all the information regarding anything is available on the internet today, leading to a dependency on this platform to know about anything; be it students who want to find details regarding any thesis or a person looking for a new job. From small to big, all the information is present on the internet. Please usually use search engines to reach the information using a very easy process. For instance, if someone want to go to an event, they will search the event details on google( a popular search engine) and will also book the tickets for that event online. Such facilities are available for everything nowadays. This example describes how the information present on the internet - be it small information or excess; has simplified lives of people. Internet today has made the life of people so comfortable compared to earlier generations, as there was hardly any information and data present online.
Furthermore, all the photos and videos that people used to store in laptops can be uploaded over the internet. Hence, not only someone else's information but a person's own information can be accessed online. For instance, many organisations have facilitated cloud technology which allows people to upload the data that is supposed to be filling the space in their laptops, online. This makes storing large amount of data in the same place possible. This is a great example of how we can, not only access some crucial information required for day to day work but also our own data online through latest technologies.
Lastly, a lot of information over the internet helps people save money. This is in case when people do not know how to perform a task and they can just search over the internet all the details regarding how that task can be performed step by step. For instance, as per a new research conducted in USA, almost 90 percent of women try to learn cooking through watching videos over Youtube. This is definitely a great way to learn new things. Apart from this example there are many other things that can be learnt over the internet, such as many students do certification online and learn coding these days to enhance their skills and get a good job or promotion. Such applications of information present online makes it worth some risks associated with it related to security and authenticity.
Some people may argue that too much access to information online has many risks as well, such as stealing of people's band details and identity theft such as signatures and passwords but aren't there at least some problems associated with everything that facilitates comfort. All the technical inventions and discovery always have their merits and demerits. It is on us how we compare the both. Usually, if merits of a facility out weights the demerits then it is considered successful. Although these instances such as any personal information theft on the internet are rare, yet government has taken so many measures and constantly trying to improve the security.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 441, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...en if it is in excess; does not mean we cant control it. I believe the benefits of i...
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Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
... easy process. For instance, if someone want to go to an event, they will search the...
^^^^
Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
... not only someone elses information but a persons own information can be accessed online....
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Line 7, column 343, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
...almost 90 percent of women try to learn cooking through watching videos over Youtube. T...
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Line 7, column 587, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to code'.
Suggestion: to code
...dents do certification online and learn coding these days to enhance their skills and ...
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Line 9, column 187, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...ft such as signatures and passwords but arent there at least some problems associated...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, look, may, regarding, so, then, well, apart from, at least, for instance, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2995.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 602.0 442.535393258 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97508305648 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95335121839 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73296039995 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 289.0 215.323595506 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480066445183 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 955.8 704.065955056 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6195848523 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.964285714 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.32142857143 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270202901815 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763710841812 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614063618519 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161681196366 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184768811149 0.0667264976115 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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