Sports stars and movie stars have an obligation to behave as role models for the young people who look up to them. In return for the millions of dollars that they are paid, we should expect them to fulfill this societal responsibility.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
According to the author the actors should behave as role models for the young people who look to them since they are paid millions of dollars we should expect them to fullfill this societal responsibility. How should actor behave is always a question of debate since many young children tries to emulate them. I agree with the author's claim for following reason.
Actors have lots of fan following out which majority of them are young people. They are easily influenced by small things and therefore when they see their favorite actors doing something they try to emulate them without analysing if its right or wrong. For instance, when young people see their favorite actors smoking even they start smoking without analysing consequences of this. Even when we see actors making entry in sports bike without helmet with try to copy their style. Therefore its actors responsibility to behave as a role model and see through it that they are not sending any wrong message to their fan following.
There is famous phrase "With great power comes great responsibility". With millions of dolloars and prestige that comes with rising fan following it also comes with a responsibility. Apart from how they display themselves its also important what views and opinions they hold on a particuler matter since young people will to align their views with them. For instance, Aamir khan a renowned actor in India once said in a interview that he does'nt feel safe in India after which he was subjected to harsh criticism. This type of view will encourage young people to disrespect their home country.
However, we should also understand that actors are a common man who have their personal life and prefer some space. How they behave in their personal space is completely their own matter and we should'nt intrude that space. For instance, A actor who smokes is not wrong just touting about it is wrong. He might have habit of smoking and getting rid of it not easy.
In conclusion, Actors have great responsibility on how they show themselves to young people as they will try to emulate them but even as a fan followers should respect their personal space.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, apart from, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93424657534 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58319990495 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484931506849 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5361900281 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.055555556 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2777777778 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293069912212 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102781088263 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104066301219 0.0758088955206 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192616801349 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103901141077 0.0667264976115 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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