Some people believe that government officials must carry out the will of the people they serve. Others believe that officials should base their decisions on their own judgment.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
What approach goverment should follow while making making a judgment has been a long debate while some believe that they should consider the will of the people they serve others believe that they should make decisions based on their own judgment. Since the primary motive of the government should be to serve the people my view is partly align to the first one.
The primary purpose of a democratic goverment is to reform its people lives. If the goverment are given liberty to make decisions on their own most of the decisions they make would benefit themselves rather than the people. This will undermine the purpose of democracy. For instance, In North Korea peope are suffering from severe starvation resulting in deaths of millions of people still officials are inclined towards bolstering their defense sector. Recent testing of a long range missile shows their frivolous attitude towards the life of their people. On one hand their people are suffering instead of augmenting their situation they are ulitizing the much needed resources for defense.
Furthermore, If government tend avoid people’s will and their views they would not be in power for long time as people would start protesting against the goverment. For instance, In 2014 Ukranian goverment had a strong predilection towards Russia because of which they refused a deal with Europe. I strong pro western protest occured in ukraine and they were successfull in overthrowing the government. Its imperative for government to align their views according to their people needs.
However, I concede that in some areas its better that government make decisons based on their own judgment as public interference would impede the decision making process. For instance, India signed rafale planes deal with France recently. Ideally the deal was supposed to be signed much earlier, but people were wrongly influenced by oppositions and therefore they created problem in the decision making leading to unnecessary delay.
In conclusion, Its important for the goverment to consider will of the people they serve before making decisons as their and people view should exist in discord for the betterment of the country. However few sectors such as medical and defense where technical expertise is required government can make decisions on their own.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: making
... approach goverment should follow while making making a judgment has been a long debate while...
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Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... decisions based on their own judgment. Since the primary motive of the government sh...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 339, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'aligned'.
Suggestion: aligned
...e to serve the people my view is partly align to the first one. The primary purpos...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...overment is to reform its people lives. If the goverment are given liberty to make...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 370.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27837837838 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58241086446 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510810810811 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6823542802 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.882352941 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7647058824 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390700116472 0.243740707755 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124880410042 0.0831039109588 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788345447057 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235385168524 0.150359130593 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718286679321 0.0667264976115 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: making
... approach goverment should follow while making making a judgment has been a long debate while...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... decisions based on their own judgment. Since the primary motive of the government sh...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 339, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'aligned'.
Suggestion: aligned
...e to serve the people my view is partly align to the first one. The primary purpos...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...overment is to reform its people lives. If the goverment are given liberty to make...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 370.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27837837838 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58241086446 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510810810811 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6823542802 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.882352941 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7647058824 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390700116472 0.243740707755 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124880410042 0.0831039109588 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788345447057 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235385168524 0.150359130593 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718286679321 0.0667264976115 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.