Some people believe that government officials must carry out the will of the people they serve Others believe that officials should base their decisions on their own judgment Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your o
Government officials are people who have been selected or elected to serve the people in a capacity, as regards the position to be filled. Over the past decades, there have been trends on how democracy in a country can be incorporated to ensure a fair hearing of citizens in the country. The prompt seeks to address this issue by presenting an argument as to whether citizens should be heard in terms of their opinion or Government parastatals should do so autocratically, without taking their plight, that is, acting independently. In my opinion, I mostly agree with the position that Government should perform without reservations the will of the people for two reasons, which I would elucidate below; however, I do concede that outrageous propositions by the citizens could be an issue.
To begin with, according to History, In 1960, when Nigeria got her independence from their colonial master-Britain. They sought for democracy to be practiced because of the previously rule of military regime in which an autocrat has the final say to the happenings and events in the country. With the said heroes being celebrated in the likes of Nnamdi Azikiwe, who fought for democracy to be paracticed in the country. If he had not been discouraged to pursue this quest, maybe the people would have died in silence. People deserve the right to fair hearing, and when Government officials are amenable to the plight of the people there would be considerable change in the long run. Changes which include economy, political, and enviromental grwoth will be significant.
Additionally, taking up the people's plight will enable the Government to develop crtical thinking towards solving problems in the society. It is posible that they may not overly take care of all emerging problems, but given the open ground to air the views of its citizen will bolster the awareness of critical consitions that needs to be solved.
Admittedly, some may argue that succumbing to every biddings of the people may result in irregularies and lack of concrete direction of their office in power. For instance, In a meeting, in which there is a leader in charge, and members are blatantly giving their opinions. there will be not definite conclusion to the solution of a problem, hence no resolution. However, to restate the possibility of fair hearing, it has greatly help in knowing how best to serve the people effectively.
In conclusion, it is evident that it is wise for Government officials to serve the people efffectively by carrying the responsiblity of listening and working towards achieving their outcry. however, this should be done on adequate level to ensure authority and composure of that office.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be incorporated to ensure a fair hearing of citizens in the country. The prompt s...
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Line 1, column 355, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...ss this issue by presenting an argument as to whether citizens should be heard in terms of th...
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Suggestion: There
...rs are blatantly giving their opinions. there will be not definite conclusion to the ...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'helped'.
Suggestion: helped
...ibility of fair hearing, it has greatly help in knowing how best to serve the people...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...working towards achieving their outcry. however, this should be done on adequate level ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, as regards, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2258.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 443.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09706546275 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90309602182 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530474040632 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0418063027 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.444444444 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6111111111 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255452506866 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809947121083 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529368348178 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148613384358 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313692139162 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.