Men and women because of their inherent physical differences are not equally suited for many tasks Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In developing and supporting your position be sure to address
Physical difference, by definition, could be referred to as variations in terms of structure, physiological functions, and outlook appearance of either a male or a female. Over the decades, there have been trends for the quest for women rights and equality, most especially, in work forces, positions and other platforms.The prompts seeks to address this issue by proposing that nuances in the structural makeup of both sexes, male and female, are not given the same consideration for roles and tasks. However, I mostly disagree with this position for two reasons, but i do concede that there are tasks involving physical strength that may be considered in assignment to both genders.
First of all, It has been seen that being given equal opportunities would be tantamunt to healthy competitions between males and females.For instance, consider the president of Malawi, Agatha Naanu, who is a female. She must have contested alongside with other male counterparts to ascertain such position as the seat of presidency. One would imagine the amount of work that she must have put regardless of the orthodox or conventional system of a male ruling. If she had not persevered against all odds, would we have known that women could actually and successful venture into leadership in totality. I guess not, that means that, equal rights should be given for both sexes in leadership positions.
To also add to this, In time past, there have an outcry of certain groups- known as feminists who feel they fight for the rights of women. This implies that, women wants to heard and not be sideline. for example, consider a classroom- mixed school, assessment should not be bias, but fair opportunity should be g
Admittedly, in some cases, some may argue that as a result of the physical makeup or structure of females that certain task that require physical strength may not assigned to them. For instance, Julius Berger- a famous construction company and logistics would rather prefer to employ males for this role because the need for physical strength and lots of man-labour. This might be true as one would consider that during the pubertal stages of development, especially the development of secondary characteristics in which men grow stronger than women. however, women have changed the narrative by venturing into courses in universities and colleges, such as engineering to be competent in this kind of job.
In conclusion, in as much as not all roles are suitable of both male and female, there should be opportunities to allow either gender to showcase their competence without being gender bias.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, for example, for instance, i guess, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2186.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 426.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13145539906 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84260185132 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539906103286 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1732751091 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.733333333 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5333333333 5.21951772744 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189189875907 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066701885252 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370989661354 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105580417801 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385485551611 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.