“Success means a great ability to communicate ones essence”
“Success means a great ability to communicate ones essence”
Success, in the society is usually defined by the net worth of a person. The prompt recommended that the ability to communicate ones essence and thus impact the lives of others is the true meaning of success. In my opinion, I mostly agree with this prompt for two reasons.
Success is usually objective rather than subjective. A person's success should be defined by individual standards and not societal standards. For example, a person that is opulent may be considered as successful by the society on the basis of materialistic possessions. However, this Wealth doesn't unambiguously mean that the person has been able to significantly impact the lives of people in the society, as not all wealthy people are generous. Most of them are rather parsimonious in their lifestyle. This shows that the objective measures of success are spurious. An individual achieving a set of goals slated on for a designated period of time is successful too. Even though it may not be acquiring material possession, but being able to cultivate the discipline to carry out a task is success. Furthermore, in the field of academics, grades are a measure of success and this school of thought is fallacious. It has been seen in several cases where the slow learners or students that had poor grades in school make invaluable impact to the lives of people as not everyone will become a savant in academics.
The ability to fulfil one's purpose is success. It is said that "Comparison is a thief of joy". Juxtaposing the achievements of people is an incongruous way to define success. This is because everyone has a unique purpose in life and the ability to achieve one's goals is an essential proof of success. For example, a man with a goal to become a school teacher, when he eventually becomes a school teacher has communicated his essence and by personal standards is successful. This is because he has been able to achieve his goal.
Furthermore, some might opine that living in penury regardless of the inner satisfaction a person feels, is not a true measure of success as purpose should make one thrive not only to improve the lives of others, but one's own life first. However, some people regardless of their obvious achievements still feel unfulfilled. This is to say that success is actually the ability to communicate ones essence and should not be based on objective measures.
In conclusion, the prompt that success is the ability to communicate ones essence is not an easy bone to chew on, as there are diverse opinions about it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, thus, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2162.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 439.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92482915718 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91910217845 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457858769932 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.9 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7949285235 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0869565217 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82608695652 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429613467351 0.243740707755 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135842131774 0.0831039109588 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170983378356 0.0758088955206 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.373087095991 0.150359130593 248% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.288737956571 0.0667264976115 433% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.