"The surest indicator of a great nation is not the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but the general welfare of all its people."
Yes indeed, their achievements are primary reason why the majority of nation's people benefit today. they have made life easier for us. A wise sage once said- 'if it weren't for the telephone, the smartphone would not have existed.'
Any country's achievements are primarily due to their rulers artists and or scientists. The history books are filled with the achievements of rulers and their empires. In indian history books we can find the contributions of the ancient Indus Valley and Harrapan civilizations to the nation at their time. Surprisingly they had an especially intricate drainage system even at that point in time. Their drainage system designs are used extensively in current time india. The telephone invented by Alexander Graham bell is a boon for us. now we can talk to our friends and relatives who are hundreds of miles away with the click of a button on a smartphone which is an enhanced version of the traditional telephone.
A nation's success can be determined by multiple factors. Some major ones are the results of actions of eminent leaders, brilliant scientists and artists. This is clear from the jobs that each person performs in their contributions for the nation. The erudite mathematician AK Ramanujan, who has contributed massively to the subject was genius in the field. He said that Goddess Kali gave him the gift to understand numbers and their paradigms. His theories were adopted by the british. they also had to concede that despite the fact that they once ruled india, they had much to take from india in the form of mathematical theories and cultures ad traditions of the indian kings. if it weren't for the light bulb invented by Nicola Tesla would still be dependent on the sun for visual light. now irrespective of night or day we can continue our work at our convenience due to artificial light.
All the achievements of such people are for the betterment of the majority of the nation's people. Their contributions are prevalent today. The famous astronomer Galileo has contributed much towards space studies and today we can send space shuttles to planets due to the platform that astronomers set as a strong base. The works of the famous pianist Mozart are inspiration of so many musicians today. painters can get motivated by the great renowned painters' - Pablo Picasso's and MF Hussain's works.
if we assismilate all the contributions by such talented, respected and powerful people of a nation, we will eventually reach the conclusion that they are the main reason if not the only reason behind the good life of majority of public today. so we must make sure to pay our respects and homage to such great idols for their contributions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2246.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 452.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96902654867 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78236258427 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544247787611 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 699.3 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7597537979 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3846153846 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 5.21951772744 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0747834138207 0.243740707755 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0234184731897 0.0831039109588 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381874148286 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0454744725651 0.150359130593 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138229547359 0.0667264976115 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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