The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Every nation is independent of its own development. Each nation has aim to achieve great wealth which can lead to development and maintaining society. Development as a whole country can bring an economic change but will this suffice?Great nation can be defined by many ambiguous answers from people.But what is truly exemplar nation?Is it artist,rulers or scientists?
Firstly, we are all living in this competitive world. People are ought make a difference by running in this race of greed. There are some countries who condemn respect towards women. For example, Qatar is world’s wealthiest country but there are few restrictions over women which are preposterous.There are few parts of the country where women have no right to drive.Having such wealth, dosent qualify the country to as a great nation. Chivalrous attitude and amending equal rights to women should be their first priority.
Secondly, there are nations who are known for their artists. For example, USA is famous for Hollywood.Though there are few good actors and musicians, this dosen't makes it a great nation. Racism is still going on even till this year. Racists comments and abusive language are few factors which are deleterious to mankind.
However, there are few merits and demerits of every nation.There are few nations who believe in development of general welfare. Considering the example of Canada, government have given them some stipend to every citizen and non-citizen of the country during this Covid-19.Helping in tough time can bring happiness to those needy families.
In conclusion, an ideal nation is the one who belief’s to bring a general welfare to its people rather than their wealth, rulers, artists, or scientists.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 273.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2967032967 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99115594947 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59706959707 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.0901596932 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195519840094 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632563875349 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689288568144 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117369050861 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806962418105 0.0667264976115 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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