The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
A great nation is the one that has prosperity among its people. Further, its history, science and technology and rulers at past adds to its richness. The prompt as it is suggesting that the general welfare of the people is vital indicator of the great nation. I mostly agree, with the given statement for the following reasons.
Firstly, for a nation to boast its greatness it should provide the citizen with the basic needs. If a country does not have proper infrastructure and people are dying of hunger, improper health facilities. Also, if the education facilities job opportunities are festering then, no matter, how rich the history of the nation is or it has advanced arms and ammunition or the monuments and memorial. The country cannot be considered great. As, the fact cannot be ignored that the people, in such country, will suffer from unemployment, poor nutrition health and education.
Secondly, the nation, with proper infrastructure development and that provides its people with the basic fundamental rights is considered great. For an instance, a nation where the people are getting propre health facilities and get timely cure, advanced education to compete with the shrewd mind around the world, proper nutrition and transportation facility are much happier than the people that lacks it. Also, then only a greatness of a country is visible`. On the other hand, if there is a famous artist in that nation and is acclaimed worldwide and also earns handsomely. But the artist earns for himself where majority are suffering. So, people being the core of the nation must be nurtures well.
Lastly, some might argue that the history of the great rulers and creation of the nation with the wars that were fought bravely makes or the art of the artist that has its mar on the history or the revolutionary finding in the science would make a nation great. However, they must know it is feasible to some extent and cannot be applicable always. These things are additional points that would embellish the greatness. The true greatness of nation lies in the happiness of the people, its contribution to the world peace and prosperity.
In conclusion, the greatness is a subjective matter, but the people being core and their welfare the greatness of the nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 341, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...to some extent and cannot be applicable always. These things are additional points tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, well, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 380.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00263157895 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7332200222 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497368421053 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.632891239 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.05 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27772750883 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887652362855 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665849761212 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177029372752 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663967354798 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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