The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
There are many indicators to realize a great nation and are represented not only by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people. The existence of prominent individuals in any nations help other nations to know more about them but it should be considered that, some facilities that nations prepare for the society's people cause other nations try to be better than before. People's welfare in any nation is so important and it can cause assimilation in the society.
We have to admit that, ignoring prominent individual's achievements in nations is unjustifiable. The existence of successful person in nations can create better perception to be recognized by other nations.
It cannot be denied that, facilities and welfare are the most important cases in every nations but prominent person in every nation can help other nations to have better knowledge to that nation. For instance in every culture and every society one thing is more important than other things like Iranian peoples are famous for their intelligence and in any nation could be inspired by other nations.
With all that said, welfare in the society and government's support can help the nation to be progressed and other nations see their progression and i believe that, governments are responsible in front of the people's comfort and should prepare more facilities for the people who are live in a nation. Aside from these, prominent individual isn't a good criteria for realize a nation as you know welfare of people is the most important things that could be considered and help them to be shined. For instance Indians are poor and all people all around the world if hear about Indians the first thing that come to their mind is their low facilities and poor life.
Additionally, existence of famous people or famous scientists cannot be the surest indicator for the nation.
As a result, firstly for knowing any nation scientific achievements or artist achievement can help us to know more about the nation but it cannot be the principal criteria to realize the nation. Consequently, welfare is the most important criteria and it is fathomable that, nations should be under supervision governments and governments are responsible for preparing facilities for their nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...these, prominent individual isnt a good criteria for realize a nation as you know welfar...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, so, for instance, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1921.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 377.0 442.535393258 85% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09549071618 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79740638525 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.387267904509 0.4932671777 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 613.8 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6108417379 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.769230769 118.986275619 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 23.4991977007 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248676550462 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129725506286 0.0831039109588 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.195690208124 0.0758088955206 258% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150275475262 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122054422878 0.0667264976115 183% => OK
automated_readability_index: 17.1 14.1392134831 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.