There must be strict national regulations to preserve the environment in its pristine condition.
Environment is the reason why we are surviving. The food that we eat is obtained from the plants and animals. The water which is most essential for the sustainance of life is also present in the environment. So isn't it our prime responsibility to protect what provides us protection? Over the years the humans have exploited the nature in many ways. The temperatures of the planet are rising dramatically and the ice at the poles is melting. These deleterious effects are enough to indicate that there is a necessity of strict regulations to bring things under control.
The human population has been increasing over the years. More forest land is being cleared for the building concrete jungles. And we know that the forests are home to many different species of flora and fauna. Government has reserved areas for forest and even put fines for illegal clearing of the forest lands. But the issue need strict supervision as lot many people are able to produce fake papers and even do their business cunningly.
Unfortunately the marine life too is not spared from the human actions. The fishing business is done on a large scale through out the world. So many people dump their garbage in to the water bodies. The industrial waste is let in to the water. In some countries like India people bathe and wash their cattle in the rivers. The marine life is also prone to the hazard of oil spill which happens due to the toppling of the oil carrying ships in the sea. The percentage of the potable water is only 3% on the globe and still we cease to understand the seriousness of the matter. Strict rules should be enforced against polluting the water bodies. The fishing business cannot be controlled and specially not in the under-developed nations where it might be a prime source of income for many people.
Everyone has heard about about global warming and we know about the serious repercussions it possesses. One of the main reason of the global warming is the pollution caused due to the I.C engine vehicles. If their usage is alleviated, we might be able to prolong the terrible fate of the earth by many years. The excellent alternative is the usage of Electric Vehicles. Government is planning out many schemes for subsidizing the electric vehicles usage. Like providing subsidized servicing and maintenance or a subsidy on the tax, etc. The government cannot impose a ban on the engine vehicles immediately, but can encourage the use of EV's. The transition will definitely require a few more years.
The sceneic beauty of so many place around the world are a source of income for the tourism industry. These sublime spots should not be used for the residential or industrial use in any way. There should be stringent laws against the tourist attempting to destroy the scenic beauty in any way.
As we have seen above there are many issues regarding the threat to the environment. Governments should impose strict regulations for the same. Nature does not need our protection. If there is excess exploitation, nature cleanses and decimates through tsunamis, volcanic eruptions and other disasters. So in order to avoid that, we must ensure strict measures.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
... is also present in the environment. So isnt it our prime responsibility to protect ...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...nd we know that the forests are home to many different species of flora and fauna. Government ...
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Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...shing business is done on a large scale through out the world. So many people dump their ga...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and wash their cattle in the rivers. The marine life is also prone to the hazard ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: about
... for many people. Everyone has heard about about global warming and we know about the se...
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Suggestion: C
...ng is the pollution caused due to the I.C engine vehicles. If their usage is alle...
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Line 7, column 440, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'vehicles'' or 'vehicle's'?
Suggestion: vehicles'; vehicle's
...ny schemes for subsidizing the electric vehicles usage. Like providing subsidized servic...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...estroy the scenic beauty in any way. As we have seen above there are many issue...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, still, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2643.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 539.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90352504638 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81833721656 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69655310076 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 215.323595506 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508348794063 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 842.4 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 36.0 20.2370786517 178% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4782170047 60.3974514979 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.4166666667 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9722222222 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.19444444444 5.21951772744 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114057773573 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0253651595872 0.0831039109588 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429666889955 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585115871779 0.150359130593 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285889165275 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 100.480337079 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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