Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
The issue of whether people who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy, has engendered controversy and can be divided into two schools of thought. On the one hand, staunch defenders support that people who support their ideas are those that learn to overcome the most difficult obstacles in life. On the other hand, opponents contend that individuals are usually affected by their surroundings and thus forgo any ideas they probably had. Were I, in such an ambiguous position whether to agree or disagree, I would support the former idea, even though the latter one may present some positive attributes.
First and foremost, people who see their ideas through are those who follow their dreams and make the most required to realize them. Indeed, they are possessed by a deep knowledge of their lives and they know better than anyone what they want to achieve and which direction to follow. For example, students who have high grades in mathematics and physics may be advised by their families and teachers to pursue careers in engineering, since the latter one is directly correlated with high salaries and ample choices of jobs. On the contrary, some of the aforementioned students are likely to have an inclination only for mathematics or physics and as result want to deepen their knowledge in one of these two scientific fields. Therefore, they will realize their dreams and practice only the subjects they really matter, ignoring those close to them.
In addition, the fact that individuals are able to see their ideas through and ignore any sort of doubts or criticism, implies strong personalities and unchallenged characters. Admittedly, people care about their ideas and usually see things from a different aspect. Hence, they cultivate their disciplines and acumen as they are always ready to support what they believe and the way they think their ideas would make a positive impact. For instance, someone who is determined that new environmental policies should be implemented, reducing the emission of harmful substances in the atmosphere, would be able to evaluate why these new policies would be effective and challenge any opposite view.
According to the other school of thought, it is to difficult to avoid criticism and potential doubts, as result only a small portion of those who follow their ideas end up realizing them. This is true to some extent, because many people have thought to change the world, and at the end they have been limited to some sort of conspiracies that have made their efforts collapse. Nonetheless, people that have followed their dreams and ideas untill the end, are those who have achieved great results and those that all of the others should have as a paradigm.
In conclusion, although believing in some ideas and following them untill the end, may seem easy at a first glance, it is extremely difficult. Strong personalities are rare in our days and most of the humans tend to be negatively affected by doubts and criticism by others. Only those who are determined to win, regardless of any losses, will achieve and they will promote all the fundamental disciplines for our societies. Because, our system should be just and prolific, thus only strong characters can really change it in our favor.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, nonetheless, really, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, sort of, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 33.0505617978 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2802.0 2235.4752809 125% => OK
No of words: 554.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05776173285 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85151570047 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63614300781 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469314079422 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 865.8 704.065955056 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6091539461 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.1 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 5.21951772744 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405690376422 0.243740707755 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129314610082 0.0831039109588 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137810829342 0.0758088955206 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232464228908 0.150359130593 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132322794863 0.0667264976115 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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