Those who see their ideas through regardless of doubts or criticism others may express are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reas

Ideas can be good or bad, however they always lead towards a goal. Ideas formed by an individual always is brought into existence based on their preceived notion of "want/ demand" in their surroundings. This can range from ideas in physics such as gravity or X-Ray that win a Nobel Prize or ideas that have lead human civilization into two world wars. Those perceived ideas when executed, depending upon its nature can be viewed with either criticism and doubts or in astonishment and excitement, which brings us to point of labelling ideas as ambiguous or "context dependant". Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy but this notion is only applicable on a case-by-case basis.

Firstly, discussing about ideas that are good - ideas that are constructive and have progressed our views and notions such as the "Theory of General Relativity". When initially proposed, these ideas could have been viewed as odd or weird and may lead to critizing the idea proposer as being naive and other derogative terms. However, such ideas when executed and proved, these are the kind that tend to leave a lasting legacy, as more than the idea itself, the story of its formulative is hailed as an acheivement of mankind. These ideas demonstrate the persistence that the orginator should have had to pull through his or her ordeal.

Secondly, discussing about ideas that are bad - ideas that are destructive and degressed our society such as the "World Wars". These are ideas also travel a similar road as our good ideas, when proposed, they are dismissed. They begin to diverge, when the idea itself begins to have detrimental effects either physically or mentally to the originator and those in their immediate circles or those who have been pull into it. These ideas upon attaining their goals or failing to do so also will leave a lasting legacy based on the number of people affected by it either directly or indirectly.

In today's society, goals are more team oriented rather than individualistic, hence when ideas begin to appear to one or any number of people in the team, the results can have ambiguous results primarily based on the execution and the orginator status within the team. Ideas orignated from leaders such as Elon Musk, the founder of Tesla are hailed as visionaries and good leaders while ideas from someone who is within the team has to get their teams to agree upon the idea prior to execution etc. as these ideas may or may not impact their team negatively. Though this method proves to eliminate a lot of bad decisions and ideas passed, these are ideas regardless of good or bad, leave little mark on anyone outside the team.

To sum, ideas are originated to acheive a goal or purpose and these very ideas can be good or bad. However, for an idea to have a lasting legacy; good or bad, there are a number of factors that need to be in favour for it to happen in the first place.

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Average: 6.6 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, may, second, secondly, so, while, as for, as to, such as, in the first place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 14.8657303371 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2518.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 519.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85163776493 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68308028932 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466281310212 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 812.7 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8144187109 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.526315789 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3157894737 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229735446627 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853231863964 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867825417965 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137602895392 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727362148261 0.0667264976115 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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