It is often hard for someone to see their ideas through, if people around he or she doubts and criticizes his or her idea, however I believe it is those people who will eventually leave a lasting legacy. In this essay, I'd present my idea with some supporting examples.
Firstly and foremostly, it is common that idea which contribute for the advocate to leave a lasting legacy are revolutionary and novel, therefore at first those ideas are not accepted by ordinary people because the idea contradicts with those existing idea that people already have, and it is quite likely that people would doubt and criticizes the idea. However, if one persevere in their prospective idea, they would succeed and leave a lasting legacy. We can see manifold examples in the field of science and politics.
One example in the field of astronomy is the feat of Galileo Galilei. At the time when Galileo Galilei lived, it is widely believed that the earth is flat, however Galileo Galilei conducted a series of scientific experiment and found out that the earth is rather an sphere. At first, people felt repulsion against his idea, because it is at odds with common Christian belief, and he was even sentenced to jail, but Galileo Galilei didn't succumb to his opponents, and strived to substantiate his ideas in whole his life. In the end, as we all take it for granted today, it is a scientific fact that the earth is a sphere. In this way, Galileo Galilei left a lasting legacy for the humanity.
The second example is related to politics, Lincoln, the American presindent in 18th century tried to abolish slavery, however as a matter of course, the idea received criticism, especially from those people from southern states, in which people relied on slavery for their agricultural production. His idea and the conflict over slavery even triggered the American Civil War, resulting in catastrophic casualities, but eventually Lincoln won the war and he succeeded in the abolition of slavery. The influence of the abolition is not limited to the United States. Thesedays slavery is banned in almost all countries, thus we can conclude that although he faced criticism and doubts, he eventually left a lasting legacy.
To recapitulate my claim, for the examples and reasons aforementioned, I believe that people who see their idea through tend to leave a lasting legacy regardless of criticism and doubts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98009950249 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69722870683 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495024875622 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.4860883043 60.3974514979 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.466666667 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301132813273 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10253826379 0.0831039109588 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125147821359 0.0758088955206 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218723018384 0.150359130593 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134437285924 0.0667264976115 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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