Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
The question of what kinds of courses a student should take in his/her undergraduate education has been one debated for many years. The prompt suggests that students majoring in Business or Science should not take courses in Humanities as it wont help them progress their career. I strongly disagree with the statement for the following reasons.
Firstly, students who learn courses from various streams tend to develop into proficient problem solvers who can analyze a problem from multiple perspectives. For example, take a student who majors in economics and joins a finance firm where his/her primary job is to analyze the variation of jobs and incomes within a country. Now there are standard economic theories which would help the student come up with an approximate. However, the jobs and lives led by individuals of a country also depend on factors such as art, human happiness, history of the country and its various traditions. Thus inorder to get accurate results the economics student would benefit if he/she has some formal training in history and arts.
Secondly, students who study a variety of courses tend to develop into well rounded individuals. These students tend to contribute more to society than students who follow a unidirectional path in their undergraduate studies and hence have more fruitful careers. For instance, take the case Dr. Subramaniam Swamy, a Harvard business school graduate, a very important member of the political system of India. Dr. Swamy might have majored in business, but the knowledge he gained from studying law at Harvard substantially improved his grip over Indian politics and allowed him to better interact with the people, thereby furthering his political carrer.
Now many 'experts' feel that pursuing courses apart from the chosen major are counter-productive and in no way help students in their professional careers. To those 'experts' who raise this argument I would like to ask - If they are running a company, who would they likely hire: a student who has studied variety of courses and his a well rounded individual with amazing problem solving skills or a student who focussed on a singular topic for several years and has never left his/her comfort zone.
In conclusion I would like to say that students should be allowed to explore various possible avenues in their undergraduate education so that colleges produce well rounded individuals who can solve difficult real life problems and contribute to society in a meaningful manner.
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- Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won t benefit their future careers Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree 83
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Suggestion: Thus,
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...life problems and contribute to society in a meaningful manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2105.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 403.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22332506203 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77418052593 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573200992556 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.5252472128 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.333333333 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8666666667 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 5.21951772744 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209228780308 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813192550897 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842484700294 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133052349568 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794700619498 0.0667264976115 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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