Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
It is no gainsaying that the primary purpose of higher academic institutions is to ensure a proper understanding of any individual's course of study which is germane to building a career in the same field. Profoundly, the apothegm "prove worthy academically and in character" is commonly recited during convocations to delineate that grandaunts have not only be academically groomed but also trained to be individuals of high moral standards in the society. A statement which believes students in the sciences and business should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities is incongruous to the mantra of the universities which is "Unity in Diversification".
Interestingly, all academic field including the sciences and businesses were developed from languages and philosophy. The ideologies promoted in the sciences and businesses were based on individual's reasonings, discoveries and are all communicated through languages -all of which are enmeshed in the humanities. A typical example is the famous "Newton Laws of Motion" which was written in the Mathematics Book of Philosophy by Sir Isaac Newton himself, therefore corroborating the influence of humanities in advancing scientific objectives.
Another prominent example could be linked to the advent of technology which is a major scientific aspect. It is however pertinent to note that technology advancements such as mobile and desktop applications have been greatly utilized in the field of Humanities. Noting that the writing of algorithms is dependent on programming and data from the desired field which could be Humanities which shows the need for programmers to be verse in different aspects to foster smooth communication among the data providers and developers.
Additionally, the preservation of knowledge in both the Sciences and Businesses are dependent on documented or written theories, principles and laws. Unarguably, the fundamental tenet of writing is proper use of the desired languages. Imagine scrapping the mandated two credits course titled "the use of English" in Nigerian Universities. It would be aberrant since all communications are officially made in English. Not forgetting that some students have a separate flair for writing apart from their desired course of study. It should also be noted that some students might be forced to go into sciences or businesses whilst they have potential for the humanities.
We desire a world where everyone lives in peace and shared prosperity and the University plays a major role in achieving that. Diversification is not an option.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2226.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 396.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62121212121 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41432445269 2.79657885939 122% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542929292929 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6494834045 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.941176471 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2941176471 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41176470588 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246525128538 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744839345941 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694475475404 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11922573063 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707935812042 0.0667264976115 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 48.8420337079 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.1639044944 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.38706741573 120% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 100.480337079 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.8971910112 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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