Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
I would like to disagree to the given statement that an undergraduate student majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities. Humanities helps a students gain an all round improvement and skills.
Youth should be taught to become a good and responsible citizen first rather than just take up a career for money to pay bills. This can be taught only when there is a proper balance of Humanities courses in any undergraduate course be it Business or Science. While it can be said that Business or Science help us grow a materalistic approach to the world, Humanities teach us to have an aesthetic approach as well.
A person having brilliant skills in his major subject and having no social skills is as good as a robot or a machine. We must have sympathy for our collegues, have leadership as well as team skills. These qualities are incorporated in a student when he studies Humanities in addition to his major.
It can be argued that studying Humanities in addition leads to an additional expeniture on the college fee. But it is more than worth it. Imagine a world where everyone is working like a machine having no social skills. It is everything but what a human was made by the God.
Therefore, Humanities subjects are must for undergraduate student majoring in any stream. These courses, as the name suggests induces 'humanity' in a human.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 2235.4752809 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 244.0 442.535393258 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75409836066 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82691834822 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565573770492 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2477738872 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8571428571 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264749007227 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908312306197 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955771973341 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155503631028 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097292998603 0.0667264976115 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 100.480337079 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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