To understand the important characteristics of a society, is it enough to simply study its major cities ? Agree or disagree
“God made the country and man made the town”, the mentioned quote helps us understand the origin of human society. The prompt states that to learn about the features of a society you need to learn the major cities. I disagree with the statement and argue that rural areas have a more remarkable role in depicting the characteristics of society.
Major cities, in this up-to-date world, have proven to be developed in terms of finance, politics, infrastructure, and education sectors and also have been able to touch international grounds by their innovations, but they have remolded the true essence of culture and tradition of their society. The standard of living in the cities is poles apart from that of the countryside. The cities now have migrants from different parts of the world that have appended their values to the cities. They, therefore, show an amalgam of various cultures and traditions.
On the other hand, the countryside has a preserved lifestyle of its own. These societies have homogeneity in terms of people, profession, language, dressing style, and food. The outlook of the people remains the same due to less exposure to the outside world and so they abide by their principles. To truly understand the characteristics of a society you need to know it from the people who worship it themselves.
For example, India has over 70 percent of the population living in minor towns or villages. These small towns bear to the substantial number of historic events that hold great importance. Researchers studying India’s heritage and culture will prefer going to Agra, Jaisalmer, or Jodhpur instead of acquiring that from the fast-paced cities like Mumbai, Pune, or Bangalore. These cities show faint traces of their society's characteristics although although it is usually overshadowed by the modern ones.
Another example to prove my argument would be that of France. Paris has been regarded as the fashion capital of the world and is home to accomplish fashion designers and artists of varied fields of design, but it does not show what France is all about. Apart from the Eiffel Tower in Paris, France has widespread vineyards, the cheese factories, the perfume industry, the island of Corsica. One cannot learn French society by learning about its capital city Paris.capital city,
Of course, one would argue the city being economically and socially more developed than the small towns hold more weightage towards the characteristics of a society they are living in, but those are adulterated versions of the veracious one. Hence to perceive a society's definite characteristics, one must learn that from the countryside rather than a developed city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, therefore, apart from, for example, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2249.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 435.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17011494253 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86603704061 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549425287356 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5754146907 60.3974514979 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.45 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18268406669 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474857135946 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464488185415 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892601740226 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302552837978 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 100.480337079 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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