To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study it's major cities.
"Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position".
The societies in different nations have various ways by which they can be studied and understood. Societies differ from country to country, from tribe to tribe and from race to race. The various ways to study and understand the different societies include conducting a survey on their culture; the way of life of the people, on their economic status, on their educational systems, on their social interaction with their neighboring countries and on their major cities.
Therefore, I'd agree that to gain adequate knowledge of the pros and cons of a society one needs to study it's major cities. This is because the major cities is mostly where the seat of power; i.e where the governmental power will be. So, with the presence of power in a city, other characteristics that makes up a better society must be in place such as education, security, basic health care, commerce, industry, transportation, etc. For example, to understand the characteristics of the American society, study the New York City, studying the major city in the United States of America, we will be able to see so many attributes that will define who an American is. One is the value placed on Academic and research, the funds used to keep their educational system running is gigantic and that has a positive effect on the economic status, as we have a lot of the Americans that have a high standard of living and are living comfortably compared to study the major cities in Nigeria for instance Lagos, if we scrutinise how the government fund the educational system to encourage research is so derogatory. And that has in turn has effect on the economic well being of the citizens with high turn out of graduates coupled a spike in unemployment rate in the nation. This has further led to a surge in the level of crime rate. As we also have people in the seat of power looting government funds, thereby to a low standard of living for the Nigeria citizen.
Nevertheless, by merely observing the major cities of a society won't give a well detailed explanation of the characteristics of that society. So, employing other means of garnering information can be implored such as conducting interviews with the citizens of that society, merging and comparing it with the valuable information collected from the observation will make a good study of that society.
In conclusion, to understand the most important characteristics can truly be done by the study of it's major cities, but the addition of other methods we enhance an effective study of such society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2103.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 430.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89069767442 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87225872792 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476744186047 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 681.3 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.7479631173 60.3974514979 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.214285714 118.986275619 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7142857143 23.4991977007 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 5.21951772744 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184235130573 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662708323193 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040683969238 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111927457769 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274900088427 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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