To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Our society is made up of urban localities and rural localities. To completely disregard one in favour of another would be an incorrect stance to take in this argument as one must understand that both are two sides of the same coin.
In this day and age, major cities are harbingers of change. A trend or change that births in a city may rapidly spread across an entire region, courtesy of the myriad number of people who inhabit it and the technology we have at our disposal. People from all walks of life share the same space. This allows for fusion of cultures, values, and ethics in ways which would not have been possible otherwise. Thus, cities act as trendsetters. Slowly and steadily, cities instil in society values that resonate in the various people that inhabit it. It can be said with assurance that many important characteristics of a society are defined in cities.
However, we should not ignore the fact that the rural areas do not play a significant part in defining our society. The way of life prevalent in cities may not be prevalent there but it is still a way of life that adds to society. It has begun to play a more significant role as urbanisation has begun to take place on a scale greater than before. Those from towns and villages are flocking to cities, taking with them, along with their materialistic possessions, ideas and values which over a period of time infuse with the existing set and redefine society as a whole.
Both ways of life play an integral role in defining our society as a whole. To truly understand the important characteristics of society and what defines and redefines our society as we know it, one must study the people that inhabit it, irrespective of where they decide to call home.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 494, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...sessions, ideas and values which over a period of time infuse with the existing set and redefi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 308.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66883116883 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6206427828 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538961038961 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3660144453 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8666666667 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53333333333 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144533660314 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431679491645 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470752890804 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894599870016 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.010815084516 0.0667264976115 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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