A society is multifaceted so people can have different opinions on what is the most important characteristics of it. Cultural
factors of a society are often comes to people’s mind since they are highly diversified from society to society, and no one can be independent from those factors when they are belong to a society. They consist of how people living in the society eat, wear, proceed life, and where they live. To figure out the patterns of these complex aspects of a society, big cities would be better candidate to look into than small villages in rural areas.
First of all, metropolitans often contain representative cultural factors of the society. Someone might says that it is often hodge-podge of people from different places so there can barely room for preserving cultural aspects of a society. The reality shows this is not the case. See, for example, Tokyo, the biggest city of Japan. It boasts 16 millions of people from around world, and businesses there are highly globalized. However, once someone travel to this city and live for one or two days he or she would admit that it clearly has its own style and culture. People living there always always love to get lined up when they wait for something, do not hesitant to say sorry when accidently bumping one another. The order of the city is magnificent, and it is made from the way they live: Their culture. Meanwhile, other mega-cities such as Seoul, New York, Paris, San Paulo have its own style generated by the culture of the societies. Hence the claim that it is difficult to find the main characteristics in big cities due to diluted cultures is not quite right.
In addition, globalization enforces the traditional cultural factors, rather than weaken them. People who emphasize the importance of rural area often say that traditional aspects are not easy to survive in big cities; they would diminish by huge buildings, infrastructures, or simply too many people. However, these concerns have been dismissed thanks to the effort of governments which have tried to help traditions in big cities evolve and thrive, rather than phase away. Every day Seoul celebrates the march that the King of Chosun dynasty, the previous kingdom befor Republic of Korea, used to conducted. It is getting fame since the city is trying to conserve every details of the event and advertise to as many people as possible, which availed enough funds for maintain the ritual. Considering that many people living in country are struggling to preserve traditional cultures due to insufficient funds, it is hard to say that big cities are poor in preserving traditions.
Last but not least, Events and decisions that affect the culture of a society mainly happen and are made in big cities. We see that modern cultures of societies are heavily depends on other aspects of the societies: International relations, economy, Politics etc. We also see that the important decisions on these issues are often made in big cites. Congress and big firms are symbolically located in the biggest city of the society. They are opinion-leaders who influences forcefully cultural dynamics of the country. By simply looking at the decision making process in big cities would give you core insights on the characteristics you want to get. Note that all the people working in White House are a kind of cynosures to Americans, in the sense that their decisions are announced within 24 hours to every people living in the country, and their lives are immediately influenced.
Therefore, if you want to efficiently figure out the core part of a society you had better investigat major cities of it. If you want to cover rural area in addition to big cities, that is okay since such behaviors will give you additional information and insights. However, when we are constrained by time and money, it would be better to prioritize and focusing on surveying on big cities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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... style and culture. People living there always always love to get lined up when they wait for...
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...erated by the culture of the societies. Hence the claim that it is difficult to find ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 93.0 58.6224719101 159% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3266.0 2235.4752809 146% => OK
No of words: 658.0 442.535393258 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96352583587 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.06473204393 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.758534078 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 322.0 215.323595506 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489361702128 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 1044.9 704.065955056 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9906656986 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.866666667 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125824397623 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334567267792 0.0831039109588 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415696757363 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841136833074 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052769508839 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 158.0 100.480337079 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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