To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Human civilization evolves through the increased interdisciplinary interactions of people within a society and that society is built up on numerous norms and factors like religion, culture, literacy, interpersonal relationship of society members, infrastructure and so on. Characteristics of a society depends on those factors and they are correlated to both the cities and the rustic areas. So, to understand a society's characteristics, one must study it's cities is a plausible and qualified statement.
The issue attempts to bridge a strict relation between a societies characteristics and its cities which is too extreme to comply with. As a society is comprised of both the cities and villages, rural areas are also an intrinsic part of those characteristics. As in developing countries, most of the region is rural area, societies characteristics largely depend on it. Education, literacy level, social and economic infrastructure reflects the index of prosperity of a society and we can not imagine a society to reach the apex of prosperity without enfranchising its rural areas. In Bangladesh, a famous quote saying " If we can sustain our villages, our country will sustain", which clearly depicts the importance of rural areas.
On the other hand, cities are the heart of a country, center of all trade, governance. Technological innovations, infrastructural advancement, industrialization, educational institutions are largely centered to the cities. We can more or less predict the social and economical condition of a society by observing the cities. Likewise, by looking at the city of Baghdad we can assume the wretched condition of the Muslim society of that war torn area now. Cities are like the skin of a society whereas villages are the internal organs. To make the whole system work, as it is essential to keep the internal organs healthy, at the same time external parts also needed to be maintained perfectly. If any part fails, the whole system collapse.
Building upon the implication that cities are not the only factor to be studied to understand the characteristics of a society but as important as rural areas, we can conclude that the issue will be more substantiated if we can include the above considerations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of' or 'is composed of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of; is composed of
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Suggestion:
...as. In Bangladesh, a famous quote saying If we can sustain our villages, our coun...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'likewise', 'look', 'so', 'whereas', 'more or less', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256926952141 0.240241500013 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.128463476071 0.157235817809 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.095717884131 0.0880659088768 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0403022670025 0.0497285424764 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0352644836272 0.0444667217837 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11838790932 0.12292977631 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0302267002519 0.0406280797675 74% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.38597118208 2.79330140395 121% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0277078085642 0.030933414821 90% => OK
Particles: 0.00251889168766 0.0016655270985 151% => OK
Determiners: 0.128463476071 0.0997080785238 129% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0226700251889 0.0249443105267 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00503778337531 0.0148568991511 34% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2244.0 2732.02544248 82% => OK
No of words: 356.0 452.878318584 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.30337078652 6.0361032391 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.410112359551 0.366273622748 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.314606741573 0.280924506359 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.216292134831 0.200843997647 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.160112359551 0.132149295362 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38597118208 2.79330140395 121% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 219.290929204 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533707865169 0.48968727796 109% => OK
Word variations: 57.8558204029 55.4138127331 104% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 22.25 23.380412469 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9004382288 59.4972553346 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.25 141.124799967 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 23.380412469 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5625 0.674092028746 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 53.7106741573 51.4728631049 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.98765432099 1.64882698954 121% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432504828068 0.391690518653 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.144182538557 0.123202303941 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0695683173867 0.077325440228 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.580807512594 0.547984918172 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15705686445 0.149214159877 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194317152218 0.161403998019 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525766330423 0.0892212321368 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.473184738756 0.385218514788 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0374509236637 0.0692045440612 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305015793991 0.275328986314 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291487988202 0.0653680567796 45% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.70907079646 258% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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