To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities
Thesis Statement:-
People in the cities are idulged in their own lives and difficulties, so no time to be socially responsible and have real interaction with people.
Nowadays, as we see people in the cities are having tight schedules, race of life starts with the very start of the day, people don't really have time to think much about the society. For an example if we have a glance at the people living in the cities they don't, generally, even know that who's living accross the hall, they do not have any kind of communication and interaction between each other regarding the real world social issues, altough, cities are not solely responsible for these deficiencies rather because of the schedules, plethora of population and many other factors inhibiting the social communication. So we can construe by the above citations that the people now a days in cities dont know how actually their sciety is behaving.
However, if we look at the the people who are domicile of rural areas or small cities, people interact with each other as they have less people, less hectic schedule, and less work pressure so they have time to know how the people in their society behaving and what is society's current demand. Taking an example of the rural area we see that people are always ready to help each other, they even are concerned about each other's problems. Overtly, there is a broad scope of understanding the society from small cities and villages.
Most of all, if we see, lack of education, resources, facilities, and medications etc. mostly be in rural areas. It's quite inferable that there are more chances to find the real life probelems, defficiencies, and other basic necessities in these areas. So there is ample span to improve and decipher society from rural areas or small cities.
However, in some ways society clould be benefited by the major cities. It's not completely like we can't know about society from major cities. There are copious of better ooportunities provided by these cities to understand and characterize the society, like resources available in cities could be used for the betterment of the society, the other facilities could be used like- internet, transport, eduction to improve and understand the society.
It's evident that rural areas provide better opportunity than cities to understand the charectristics of the society, by giving the numerous opportunities to communicate with people, neccesities and problems being faced by the public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, look, really, regarding, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2165.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 425.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09411764706 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76007722674 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484705882353 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.361748607 60.3974514979 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.333333333 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123623197158 0.243740707755 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500406200043 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05149501521 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976863472897 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106885169626 0.0667264976115 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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