To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Cities play a bigger role in forming a country, but a country like the United States has of major cities that are flooded with immigrants, students, workers from all over the world, carrying different cultures or religions. With so many diverse cultures its hard to tell what the true characteristics of that society would be like, considering so many religions are being practiced in the same city.
Not only is there a variety in religions, but there is a lot of modifications in the way a religion is followed. A religion may be divided into different sects, with each sect practicing the religion that is molded according to their ease. These practices also vary from group to group, and then there comes extremists.
Also, a city does not have one social class, it ranges from upper, middle and lower categories. Each class runs by different rules. Lower class may retain their culture and values but as we move up a class, we see those values getting lost. This change is not just in the upper class but the lower uneducated part of the city a well. They believe in superstitions. These superstitions then become a part of the society, hence defining its characteristics. Though, the upper class tends to become so modern that as the generation progresses, they become lenient with their cultural values that they get long forgotten.
Another misconception is spread by the media. Media stereotypes the values and characteristics of a society or culture to the extent that people start believing and behaving that way. Whereas that illustration of a society is nowhere near to reality. Media does also typecast the way of living of a certain class of a society that people fall for and try to become a part of it, which is not attainable. Thus, losing the originality.
Even if we dig deeper, research explore to find out the characteristics of the society, there is not way to tell the authenticity of those characteristics.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 184, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... start believing and behaving that way. Whereas that illustration of a society is nowhe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, then, thus, well, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 330.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87272727273 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91173490958 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536363636364 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.1046021116 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.21951772744 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0734961481004 0.243740707755 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0205506724928 0.0831039109588 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248533160303 0.0758088955206 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0412394163223 0.150359130593 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196699500047 0.0667264976115 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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