To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
To understand the most important characteristics of a society, its not necessary to study its major cities. Karachi, Lahore, and Islamabad are the major cities of Pakistan, but to say that the characteristics defined by the societies living in these cities will not justify what Pakistan is. Islamabad is the capital of Pakistan, Lahore is known as a food city, and Karachi is a coast line. Would it be right to say that Pakistan which has more than fifty cities to be defined by just 3 of its cities? Each of these cities varies from each other, so how can one say that these characteristics combined would define a society living in a certain country.
Islamabad is the capital of Pakistan and is known as a hilly area. It has one of the famous Mosques of Pakistan. Lifestyle in Islamabad is just like a regular life followed by a city of the United States. One starts there day early in the morning goes to work, come backs home has dinner and goes back to sleep. On the contrary for Lahore even though they do get up early, but their day starts after they are done with their everyday duties, which is late evening, and goes on until the wee hours of the night. While in Karachi there is no night or day for people. Karachi is the city that resides the highest population of actors and actresses, hence it is hard to say when there day starts and end.
Each city holds a different importance for Pakistan.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 54, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('hilly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('area') instead of another adjective.
...the capital of Pakistan and is known as a hilly area. It has one of the famous Mosques of Pa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 2235.4752809 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 257.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50194552529 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49990839966 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529182879377 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 704.065955056 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.8949474323 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122978987839 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519535948537 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818837479876 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833388213575 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329016749553 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 12.1639044944 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 100.480337079 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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