To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Ever since ancient times, people have always flocked to cities in search of livelihood, to fulfil their ambitions or simply because they were in awe of it. As such it’s safe to say that as of now majority of a countries population lives in its cities. Hence, does it make it safe to say that the most important characteristics of a society can be found in its major cities? I disagree. While urban areas are the citadel of technology, commerce, art and everything else modern, the rural areas are where the true essence of a country lies. This stark difference in the rural and urban areas of a country exists because the urban regions points towards where a society is heading while the rural regions hold the qualities that brought the society to where it is today. Thus if we really wish to observe the important characteristics of a society, the most germane approach would be to look at the qualities which brought it to where it is today.
Before even comparing the major cities to their more traditional counterparts, it would be better if we understand what are the major characteristics of a society. Society is simply a collective word for the people and the manner in which they live their lives. Their lifestyle and culture is what gives a society its iconic identity. while it might not appear such, it’s economy is one of the paramount characteristics of a society. Only by observing these qualities can we begin to define the qualities of a society.
Having lived my childhood in one of the most urban and modern cities of my country, I can say that they are an amalgation of different cultures and lifestyles. The chaotic, fast paced life is certainly iconic to these cities. These centers of commerce and technology have people live their entire lives running between their workplaces and their homes. In retrospect the rural regions hold the heart and soul of the country. They are peaceful havens of calmness and serenity. They are the indefatigable pillar that supports the country and its people.
Coming from a major city and having spent my college years in a small town, I can safely say that despite being in awe of the huge majestic structures that make the entirety of major cities, the small towns have a delectable earthly charm of their own. you’ll find strangers friendlier than your buddies and a feeling of contentness that’s impossible to find elsewhere. Hence I feel that the intrinsic qualities of a society, the ones that actually matter can only be found nestled in the cradle of its rural people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...afe to say that as of now majority of a countries population lives in its cities. Hence, ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ought the society to where it is today. Thus if we really wish to observe the import...
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Suggestion: While
...at gives a society its iconic identity. while it might not appear such, it's eco...
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Suggestion: You&apos
... delectable earthly charm of their own. you'll find strangers friendlier than your ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...at's impossible to find elsewhere. Hence I feel that the intrinsic qualities of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, hence, if, look, really, so, thus, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2134.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 440.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71770195673 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 681.3 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7513972377 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.7 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151870040771 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447801513572 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404632010872 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932662981476 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356332761985 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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