To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
The important characteristic of society are social culture, economical culture, traditions which depicts characteristics of society like togetherness, selflessness, cooperation, unity in diversity . To study the eclectic culture it is not necessary to study major cities, it can be understood by the countries' rural areas too. Below are the reasons which explain how important characteristic of a society can be studied from various sources.
Firstly, the rural area of a country conceal a wide variety of culture. In fact, the traditional culture are originated followed passionately in rural areas compared to urban cities. For instance, in India, which is known for it's diversity in culture celebrate all the festival with zeal, and shows characteristic of society, for example 'Ganpati' festival is celebrated with vigour, and the main reason behind this festival is social gathering. People can stay connect , share their sorrows. During this festival urban people take a break from their work and go to village to celebrate it. This shows characteristic of togetherness can be studied through rural area.
Secondly, urban cities are moving towards modernization ,from modernization the trend of nuclear family commenced. In olden days, the people of a family used to stay together. Staying together teaches values of sharing, compromising for other's happiness, quality of selflessness. While nuclear family fails to teach such values. For example , a kid raised in nuclear family is somewhat stubborn demanding while a kid in joint family is taught to share it’s toys with all the kids.
Lastly, In urban cities there is a race to earn money, forgetting to contribute to the society. Example, In rural area follows 'Panchayat system' , in which there is a chief person of the village who takes all the important decision regarding village. But, panchayat system involves inputs of the members of the village. This sense of working together develops co-operation between people of the society. For instance, There is a marriage occasion in a family. All the members of the village will together and help considering own family. This shows the feeling of oneness.
In conclusion, urban city belies happiness, togetherness but to study the real essence of the society one should study rural life , it has almost all the characteristic which a society needs.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'to share its toys'?
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to consider' or 'consider'.
Suggestion: to consider; consider
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 371.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36118598383 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97280828915 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512129380054 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.0181037072 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4090909091 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8636363636 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86363636364 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202033193794 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506998132171 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076705574159 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133805489671 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115324977371 0.0667264976115 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...essness, cooperation, unity in diversity . To study the eclectic culture it is not...
^^
Line 2, column 467, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ocial gathering. People can stay connect , share their sorrows. During this festiv...
^^
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... cities are moving towards modernization ,from modernization the trend of nuclear ...
^^
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ers happiness, quality of selflessness. While nuclear family fails to teach such valu...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... fails to teach such values. For example , a kid raised in nuclear family is somew...
^^
Line 3, column 443, Rule ID: TO_VB_ITS_NN[26]
Message: Did you mean 'to share its toys'?
Suggestion: to share its toys
...g while a kid in joint family is taught to share it’s toys with all the kids. Lastly, In urban ci...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: IT_IS[10]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
... kid in joint family is taught to share it’s toys with all the kids. Lastly, In urb...
^^^^
Line 4, column 143, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., In rural area follows Panchayat system , in which there is a chief person of the...
^^
Line 4, column 513, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to consider' or 'consider'.
Suggestion: to consider; consider
...s of the village will together and help considering own family. This shows the feeling of o...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...getherness but to study the real essence of the society one should study rural li...
^^
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the society one should study rural life , it has almost all the characteristic wh...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 371.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36118598383 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97280828915 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512129380054 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.0181037072 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4090909091 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8636363636 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86363636364 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202033193794 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506998132171 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076705574159 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133805489671 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115324977371 0.0667264976115 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.