To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Great philosophers and archaeologists, have mentioned several times in their studies that the most important characteristics of a society lies in the realm of its rural background. Rustic living are the roots of any dynasty be it a city or a kingdom.
One of the most important aspect of a community lies in its agricultural background, which in turn is the most important pillar of a civilization. These rural areas help us grow crops in abundance which aids every group of our society. Every product needs raw material, which in turn is processed in the industries located in these countryside areas. The two factors: Agriculture and Industrialisation and the building blocks of our community. Even a modern society depends on agriculture to sustain it. Surely, to understand the important characteristics of a society, we need to understand the people who live in rural areas.
Many societies have been agricultural. That society’s customs, rituals can only be understood in the context of a rural backdrop.”Culture” is the foundation pillar of building a community .A country’s culture is known by the its bucolic nature and even the major cities were once rustic and due to the development of the civilization it led to a big major city but its roots lies in its culture.Major cities are a stretch which contains various areas , sometimes of different culture ,which makes the major cities so diverse because of it. Its sad to observe that these major cities are ruining the culture and living style of these, so enriched areas. We can think it of as a Pyramid in which the base is strong and it goes upwards shredding its width, the hierarchy shows us how a “Major city” has its roots down tenaciously.
Modernisation indeed has a very dark effect on the people in rural areas ,which are forcing them to move to these so called “Colonists” areas for being referred as modern.If we go into retrospect and analyse for everything we have got today and think it as a boon, is fulfilled by these areas which are so culturally and agriculturally diversified than the major cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 352.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98579545455 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19984430922 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514204545455 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 129.461972667 60.3974514979 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.0 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0769230769 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46153846154 5.21951772744 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350922726109 0.243740707755 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118333276535 0.0831039109588 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994301629785 0.0758088955206 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197335792076 0.150359130593 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104438840701 0.0667264976115 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.