To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
1. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
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The author asserts that to understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities. I disagree with the author’s claim because the main origin of the character of any society is mainly in its villages or rural areas. The rural areas are the main source of origin of any civilization in the world.
Firstly, the major cities are those where the modern infrastructures are built by demolishing the ancient cultural heritages and people from outside the country also live in the city areas. So there is less chance to understand the characteristic of society. We can take the example of the capital city of India “Delhi” where most of the buildings are newly built by destroying the cultural heritage structures from where one could find out the characteristic of the society. Due to industrialization and modern colossal structures, there is nothing left to understand the characteristic of society. But, from the villages which are not fully developed all the structures are not modern and demolized, from where we can clearly learn and understand society's characteristics.
Moreover, major cities are those where there is more crowed, and people do not talk with each other. So it is difficult to learn and understand the characteristic of society through these people. We can take another example of micissicipi civilization which is located near the river of micissicipi. This civilization is located in the village and one can learn and understand the characteristic of the society from this.
In sum, from above it is clear that we cannot explore the characteristics of society from the major cities. To understand the characteristic of society one should go to villages and explore things.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 282.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17730496454 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16437655947 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 215.323595506 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45390070922 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9606229405 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.285714286 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220607751406 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871618840341 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560169030084 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142485921486 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021187276891 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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