To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The idea of studying major cities to understand the primary characteristics of society can come from a perception that it consists of people migrated from different parts of the country, hence, could give a good combination of people for any survey needed. These migrators coming from different areas with diverse traditions could give a good understanding of the cultural aspects of society. Big cities can also give an idea of the economic and thinking standards of a society to an extent.
However, studying just the city people wouldn't reflect the characteristics of an entire society. If you take India for example, the different prominent arts and cultures are deep-rooted in certain rural parts of the country. The prominence of dance traditions like Kuchipudi, Kathak, and Bharata Natyam can be well understood by studying the native areas where they originated. The different regional festivals of the society aren't widely celebrated generally in the cities, so a piece of huge information on their parts is lost by neglecting the rural areas.
The different regional professions like hand-looming etc. depict the features of society widely. cities dumped with corporate people working mostly in multinational companies cannot account for all the diverse professions practices across the whole society. also, the economical stature of society varies hugely across the cities, towns, and villages. The problems and drawbacks faced by rural and tribal areas are vital characteristics that will be missed out by focusing only on cities.
hence, even though cities comprising of people from various parts of the society can account for a basic idea of the characteristics of a society, it cannot cover the diverse traditions, arts, and economic conditions practiced across the society which affect the society as a whole a lot.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 33.0505617978 24% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 289.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37370242215 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91761784061 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536332179931 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4983479263 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.461538462 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173986355959 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577427956791 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398601495863 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105014548394 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016751854475 0.0667264976115 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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