To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Societies comprise of people with different characteristics. The prompt argues that it is a must to study a society's major cities to understand it's important characteristics. I mostly agree with the position for two reasons. However, I do concede that studying only the major cities might limit the understanding.
To begin, as major cities of a society provides the greatest opportunities to its dwellers, it is the place where most people live. Without studying these cities, the study to understand the most important characteristics will certainly exclude a great number of people of that society. For instance, if H&M, a giant clothing brand, would like to figure out the purchasing behavior of the people of certain country, it would be doing surveys in the biggest cities of that country. Doing this would give them an idea about what the people of that country might or might not like to purchase. On the contrary, if H&M, would've done it's surveys in a small city of that country it would not have gotten a clear picture about the purchasing behavior of the country's most people. To understand a characteristic of a society, it is therefore important to study most of it's population. And most often than not, most people of a country live in it's major cities.
Furthermore, the dwellers of major cities of a country generally come from different part of the country. So, only studying the major cities give a much more bigger picture than studying a small town. For example, if the language patterns of bangladeshi people are to be studied, then it is best to start the study from it's capital, Dhaka. Because, people living in dhaka mostly weren't born in dhaka rather they came from different parts of the country to the capital. So, studying the language of the people of dhaka, a much bigger picture can drawn regarding the language pattern of bangladeshi people. If the study were to focus on a much smaller city like rajshahi, it is very hard to find any proof that other languages do exist in the country as most of the people in rajshahi speak their native dialect of the language. But, studying dhaka,.the study would find existence of many other dialects of the language.
However, studying only the major cities might not give a clear picture of the characteristics that are being studied. For instance, in case of the previous example, even though studying dhaka would give a much clearer and bigger picture than studying any other smaller cities (in terms of dialects of the language), this picture is not complete. Because there are many areas or districts in the country that are very remote and there are very few people from those areas living in the country. So, to get a complete picture of the dialects present in the country, one also has to study the smaller regions of the country alongside the major towns.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: COMPRISE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
Societies comprise of people with different characteristics. ...
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Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...ristics. The prompt argues that it is a must to study a societys major cities to unders...
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Line 2, column 617, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: would've
...e to purchase. On the contrary, if H&M, wouldve done its surveys in a small city of tha...
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Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'bigger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: bigger
...y studying the major cities give a much more bigger picture than studying a small town. For...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tart the study from its capital, Dhaka. Because, people living in dhaka mostly werent b...
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Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
... Because, people living in dhaka mostly werent born in dhaka rather they came from dif...
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Line 3, column 546, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'draw' or 'be drawn'?
Suggestion: draw; be drawn
...ple of dhaka, a much bigger picture can drawn regarding the language pattern of bangl...
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Line 3, column 847, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ect of the language. But, studying dhaka,.the study would find existence of many o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2351.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 487.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82751540041 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65750943155 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.406570841889 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 733.5 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0090720483 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.863636364 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1363636364 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411429329236 0.243740707755 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147663047119 0.0831039109588 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137476266326 0.0758088955206 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284257751503 0.150359130593 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112454689788 0.0667264976115 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.