To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
The society retains an important place in developing human civilizations. With the time, the society had shown a drastic change towards development. Many different factors can be held responsible for majoring the development of a society. I would not be in state of agreeing the above statement as it is generalizing to the vast concept of society by studying a small set of cities that is situation and time specific.
I would like to highlight that the factors that can be labelled as important for society can be en-numerous and varied. Some of the characteristics that can be enlisted are culture, history, geography, education, governing bodies and others. Different regions may have experienced development due to a different subsets of factors among all above. For an instance, Japan is a land of innovation and since, World War 2 they have been very keen towards development of technology to become one of the World's most developed nation. Another example to be considered is South Korea, that is famous for it's media industry and cinematography. Also, China looked towards overall development of nation by prioritizing socialisation as governing principle. As different region may have different factors of importance, so, it is very difficult to list down most important characteristics of a society.
Understanding the society need a vast study of all the above factors as mentioned in above stanza. The statement tells us about considering major chunks of cities for better study. This is another challenge that one may face, to prioritize cities and stick a label of major city to them. Overtime, different cities can be considered as major one's. For an instance, at the rule of Mughals in India, Delhi was made the capital of country and was prime place for all important events. Further, when rulers of Tughlaq's rose, they considered Deogiri as more capable city to tackle all major chores, due to it's indomitable fort structures. Further, since British rule, Bombay came into picture as a economic capital of India. Thus, while considering major cities need to specify more details about it.(need to talk about cities of same era)
The major cities responsible for rise of society can be different in different era. At some point of time, one city that was more fascinated as a major city due to its contribution in terms of certain factor, may be in current era lost its position to another cities. For example, Hiroshima and Nagasaki being in a set of prime city once, after the World War 2, due to an atomic attack lost there position to other cities in terms of development and health. So, it becomes difficult to consider some cities as major and others not, which may change in future.
Thus, based on above reasoning process, we can make a conclusion that current important factors followed in the major cities that are being considered to understand nature of society is not agreeable due to drastic change observed at different period of time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... society can be en-numerous and varied. Some of the characteristics that can be enlisted ar...
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...erienced development due to a different subsets of factors among all above. For an inst...
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...itish rule, Bombay came into picture as a economic capital of India. Thus, while ...
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Suggestion: in the future
... major and others not, which may change in future. Thus, based on above reasoning proces...
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...to drastic change observed at different period of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, thus, while, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2476.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 495.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00202020202 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85363528921 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 815.4 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6963121073 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.652173913 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5217391304 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73913043478 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31813161191 0.243740707755 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926316890316 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606051498911 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188859171599 0.150359130593 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501435012831 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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