Past experiences play a vital role in human life.from a child, who burned his hand from a fire to a student who failed in the exam, past experiences have helped us to learn from mistakes or to learn from achievements.similarly,Past plays a significant role in becoming a good leader.
Mohan das karamchand Gandhi, know as the father of nation in India, championed numerous successful protest against Britishers with merely one belief, non-voilence and became the epitome of the peace.On the otherhand, Adolf Hitler, who raged against minority groups and jews, became the eptiome of dictatorship.Both of the gathered and lead proponents but Adolf Hitler became the epitome of dicatorship. Hence, If one will learn from the past, he/she could apply learning in order to become an effective leader and could not be known for abysmal.
Cultural values are important for believer's and a leaders , to lead forces effectively.In order to understand culture one must need to look back to the past and understand the values and morals of the society, how the society is shaped and how could one re-shape it for the betterment.
Arts and humanities, presents the essence of human thinking, what supporters are looking for, how they would act when confronted to the certain condition without knowing yourself and to whome you are leading, your decisions might fail or might get rejected.
However, taking novel approach wtihout having enough knowledge about the past, one can gather a supporter to lead but in a long run without considering past experience one could be an effective leader in a long run.
In conclusion, past plays a vital role in being an effective leader in a long run as it teaches moral, cultural and good jugdmental values.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: Experiences
Past experiences play a vital role in human life.from a ...
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Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...re to a student who failed in the exam, past experiences have helped us to learn from mistakes o...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Past
... or to learn from achievements.similarly,Past plays a significant role in becoming a ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...nce and became the epitome of the peace.On the otherhand, Adolf Hitler, who raged ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Both
...ews, became the eptiome of dictatorship.Both of the gathered and lead proponents but...
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Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a leader' or simply 'leaders'?
Suggestion: a leader; leaders
... values are important for believers and a leaders , to lead forces effectively.In order t...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...re important for believers and a leaders , to lead forces effectively.In order to ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... a leaders , to lead forces effectively.In order to understand culture one must ne...
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Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...d but in a long run without considering past experience one could be an effective leader in a l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, similarly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 287.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09407665505 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04935450314 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578397212544 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 23.0359550562 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.9981992606 60.3974514979 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 208.857142857 118.986275619 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.0 23.4991977007 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 5.21951772744 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0860480661141 0.243740707755 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403452118021 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0222261266023 0.0758088955206 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0441639796611 0.150359130593 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209224059542 0.0667264976115 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 14.1392134831 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 48.8420337079 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 12.1743820225 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.13 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.38706741573 122% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 11.2143820225 164% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 11.7820224719 246% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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