Understanding the past is of little use to those in current positions of leadership.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In the famous saying "Failure is the mother of success", one can find the vital role which past experiences play in current event or even future success. Past experiences whether it is good or bad will help one understand more about oneself and current situation, and then make a wise decision, just like a mirror to human. Therefore, in my opinion, understanding the past will benefit current leaders in various field, such as politics, business and science.
Firstly, history is a compulsory lesson in the political world. Mao ZengDong, the greatest leader in the Chinese history, read thouroughly about Chinese histories. From the past events, for instance, peasants revolutions, political reforms, economic development, he learned how a nation raised up and stood for hundred years. Thanks to all the vaulable lessons from the past, Mao summarised a special path for Chinese Revolution which is unite all the classes in the society and pay much attention on weapons and military force. By this strategy, Mao successfully led China to the victory of WWII and the Civil War. Therefore, past experiences can provide effective information about how to deal with different situations and what is the different reactions from people when various actions are implemented, thus helping the political leaders to make more effective and far-sighted decision.
Secondly, the past decisions and its consequences are important to business leaders. Consider, for example, if a company decided to sell a new product in a new market but it failed in the past. Now a new CEO is in augration, if he ignores the past failure experience and continue to use the same strategy in the new market. Will he succeed? Apparently, he won't. The new leader has to learn from the past and correct the strategy in order to be successful in the new market. Hence, understanding and learning from the past business decisions and market reactions will help current company leaders to form a more suitable business strategy and gain more profit.
Thirdly, the past experiences is of paramount importance to researchers in the science field. For instance, Edison invented thousands of things during his life. Without past experiences from himself or others, he would not be able to do so. The past results of related experiments show him what material is best suitable and what techniques can be used to connect different parts of the equipment. Therefore, past research results can save time for current researchers so they can focus on more crucial questions.
However, if one merely understands the past without looking at current situation and learn from the past, it will be of little use for her to study the past. In sum, understanding and learning from the past will help people to move further, have a deeper understanding of the current situation and make wiser decisions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
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...ed how a nation raised up and stood for hundred years. Thanks to all the vaulable lesso...
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Suggestion: united
...al path for Chinese Revolution which is unite all the classes in the society and pay ...
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...business strategy and gain more profit. Thirdly, the past experiences is of para...
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Discourse Markers used:
['apparently', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'third', 'thirdly', 'thus', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'such as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.250943396226 0.240241500013 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.120754716981 0.157235817809 77% => OK
Adjectives: 0.124528301887 0.0880659088768 141% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0433962264151 0.0497285424764 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0301886792453 0.0444667217837 68% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105660377358 0.12292977631 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0207547169811 0.0406280797675 51% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86112946255 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0301886792453 0.030933414821 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.088679245283 0.0997080785238 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.022641509434 0.0249443105267 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0150943396226 0.0148568991511 102% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2876.0 2732.02544248 105% => OK
No of words: 468.0 452.878318584 103% => OK
Chars per words: 6.1452991453 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.388888888889 0.366273622748 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.326923076923 0.280924506359 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.215811965812 0.200843997647 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.147435897436 0.132149295362 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86112946255 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 219.290929204 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.48968727796 105% => OK
Word variations: 59.6281790607 55.4138127331 108% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6194690265 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.347826087 23.380412469 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1823611205 59.4972553346 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.043478261 141.124799967 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.347826087 23.380412469 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.913043478261 0.674092028746 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.21349557522 230% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 53.0401337793 51.4728631049 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.94174757282 1.64882698954 118% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.513671665372 0.391690518653 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.107678917212 0.123202303941 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0835878025275 0.077325440228 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.523435351075 0.547984918172 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.186149656967 0.149214159877 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197988708776 0.161403998019 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11116320982 0.0892212321368 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.373995126533 0.385218514788 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0658342403235 0.0692045440612 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.364782074681 0.275328986314 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389882041094 0.0653680567796 60% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.