A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
To establish a national level curriculum for all students has both pros and cons. I agree that the positive side outperforms the negative side particularly during compulsory education, namely primay and middle school. However, it also provides some concerns to the education system.
On one hand, a universal curriculum for students before they enter college would benefit the society in several respects. Firstly, a uniform curriculum would reduce the cost of the school and teachers. Teachers are freed from learning and preparing new materials for students rather they can focus on existing textbooks and exam guildlines. Moreover, schools can save text purchase cost by recylcing old books and materials. Secondly, such system is the foundation of a national level college examination which is standard and fair. Consider, students from 31 different provinces in China study the same textbook and pass the same exam to enter college, this will greatly decrease the possible unfairness in terms of exam contends and formality. Such curriculum will be most benefit to primary student as it allows teachers and students to focus on basic knowledge and build up the same social value system.
On the other hand, such universal curriculum to some extent restricts students creative ability and overlooks the imbalance of regional development. For exmale, coastal region, the most prosperous place in China, enjoys high quality teaching faculties and high quality students which consequently provides more effective learning and better exam scores, thus leading more students to top-tire universities. However, students in western part of China who live in remote areas and even without proper textbooks apparently are more difficult to pass the same examination as coastal region students. Therefore, a national level curriculum will have some side effects on regional development and opportunity equality towards students. In addition, to set up such system, the government and educational institutions have to write the textbook scrupurously so that it takes the differences among provinces and development variations between cities and rural areas. Hence, it is paramount to decide which subject to involve and what contents to be examined before establishing a standard curriculum.
In sum, a national level curriculum hav eto be established with great care so that it takes the situation of different students across the nation into account and will benefit most of the population.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'apparently', 'consequently', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'in addition', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.282296650718 0.240241500013 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.124401913876 0.157235817809 79% => OK
Adjectives: 0.131578947368 0.0880659088768 149% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0478468899522 0.0497285424764 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0191387559809 0.0444667217837 43% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105263157895 0.12292977631 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0239234449761 0.0406280797675 59% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83374393904 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0311004784689 0.030933414821 101% => OK
Particles: 0.00478468899522 0.0016655270985 287% => OK
Determiners: 0.0813397129187 0.0997080785238 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0191387559809 0.0249443105267 77% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.011961722488 0.0148568991511 81% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2491.0 2732.02544248 91% => OK
No of words: 382.0 452.878318584 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.52094240838 6.0361032391 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.442408376963 0.366273622748 121% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.376963350785 0.280924506359 134% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.29057591623 0.200843997647 145% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.175392670157 0.132149295362 133% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83374393904 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 219.290929204 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557591623037 0.48968727796 114% => OK
Word variations: 63.4404179279 55.4138127331 114% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 22.4705882353 23.380412469 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2873298924 59.4972553346 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.529411765 141.124799967 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4705882353 23.380412469 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.05882352941 0.674092028746 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.21349557522 0% => OK
Readability: 60.1669233138 51.4728631049 117% => OK
Elegance: 2.15 1.64882698954 130% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.463260175983 0.391690518653 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0965551593374 0.123202303941 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0579428572526 0.077325440228 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.516463454721 0.547984918172 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155985163654 0.149214159877 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182618463006 0.161403998019 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076088018982 0.0892212321368 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.375970756935 0.385218514788 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.104800153399 0.0692045440612 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320978413351 0.275328986314 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469014057438 0.0653680567796 72% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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