Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study
The statement provided for discussion is that 'Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study'
Most universities have fields in which students can complete their majors and gain degrees for example Computer Science, Political Science, Home Science, etc. To complete majors in one of these fields, typically the students are required to complete a certain number of credits. They need to take up a minimum expected number of courses related to the field they are majoring in.
The students batch opting to complete majors in a particular field is usually very diverse. These students come from different backgrounds, may have completed thier graduation or earlier education in different fields and may have different past work experiences.
Given that students make have different interests beyond their field of study, given their past backgrounds and given the availability of multiple varied courses within the university, it would be a good idea for the universities to ensure that every student takes up a variety of courses outside the students field of interest.
There are other positives to this idea as well. Taking varied courses will ensure a good change and break the monotony of studying similar courses. It will allow students to explore other areas of interest and excel at them. This will be a good opportunity for the students to think outside the box and apply the learnings from other fields to their field of study, wherever applicable. It will allow students the opportunity to interact with students across the university, learn from their experience and perspectives.
Universities can come up with a minimum number of credits that students could complete by taking any course which does not closely relate to their field of study. The minimum requirement could be attending the lectures but not having any evaluation. This could ensure that the students would really take up a course that they would love to explore without worrying about grades.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, well, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 327.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25382262997 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65490278986 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464831804281 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.9798762955 60.3974514979 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.714285714 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.51145363085 0.243740707755 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16759221013 0.0831039109588 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129926330675 0.0758088955206 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330591053184 0.150359130593 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.221781911607 0.0667264976115 332% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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