Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The world is not a singular place, there is a daily ongoing interactions between people of different fields and knowledge. A student may major in a particular field but having knowledge and basic understanding of other fields helps create a well rounded individual.
Potential employers are all on the look out for individuals with soft skills, which are usually gotten from courses outside the student field of study, for example a Chemist to be employed apart from been adroit in his/ her field is expected to have nascent skills in management, interpersonal, organisational skills etc which can only be obtained from social sciences courses.
Taking classes outside one major exposes such individual to new ideas, new people and develop the over social and critical thinking skills. Another example is the tremendous effect computer has had on every field of study. Skills gained from learning how to use a computer cuts across every field in life. However some survey taken shows it's stressful combining these extra courses with one's major but on the long run the many benefits of these borrowed cause can never be undermined.
Many students have attested to how useful taking courses from outside their field of study has aided them in blending perfectly into the society, therefore university should require every student to take a course out it's field of study.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'interaction'?
Suggestion: interaction
...ingular place, there is a daily ongoing interactions between people of different fields and ...
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Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...mputer cuts across every field in life. However some survey taken shows its stressful c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 33.0505617978 24% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 2235.4752809 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 224.0 442.535393258 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15178571429 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59793812965 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633928571429 0.4932671777 129% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 704.065955056 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.3820961677 60.3974514979 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.25 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 5.21951772744 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254590997487 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970442034204 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785483225979 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156683083706 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765803490042 0.0667264976115 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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