Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Diverse skills underscore human personality. People should engage themself to learn new things. Similarly, In university, students should also take varieties of courses outside their respective fields but to make it as a requirement for every student can prove to be quite hectic. As students already have time-bounded lengthy courses and involve in doing internships and projects. therefore, I disagree with the staement that universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student field.
universities students already have a tight schedule. they are under pressure to clear semesters. even when I was in college, doing graduation in Engineering. I was surprised to see so many courses, directly after coming from school. At that time( even still), our Professors use to give us lots of assignments and practicals. Although, these were part of our learning but that used to keep us busy and involved in our particular subject. I barely use to get time to take part in Extra-curriculum activities or enjoy even our college fest. therefore, I believe adding other various courses will only add bunder to students.
Students show interest in those things which will, in the end, help them in their career. like, In respect to Jobs placement, they work assiduously in internships and take projects, in the respective subject, which helps them to improve their knowledge and enhance their resume. Along with that help to develop a personality because the only thing which will be important is What students had learned in their college. when students sit for final placement, the recruiters look for how outstanding the student is, how differently he/she stand from others. Hence, I can conclude that Additional courses may seem like a disadvantage for students with respect to career perspective.
Since the world is changing, it is in need of a multi-talent person. A person who is capable of managing difficult situations. A person who is curious to learn new things and bring new creative ideas. therefore, If we look for a broad prospect, we can say that making every student take the various course can help them in long run.
Therefore, Universities should not make every course a requirement for students. Rather, it should be made as a choice for them or course schedule should be planned, including every variety of courses, in benefit of student career.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, similarly, so, still, therefore, of course, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2013.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16153846154 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86550249284 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5449681069 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.875 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297694553435 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825915350653 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108886714251 0.0758088955206 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176069236737 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119823003024 0.0667264976115 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.