Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Knowledge is the power of having wisdom. It is not a bad thing to get an abundance of knowledge. Universities should provide different opportunities for students to study other than their own fields so that they can improve their skills and interests. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the given statement and argue that students should study different courses rather than they're field for two reasons.
To begin, in the current world, students are choosing their career based on the trend of the jobs rather than their passion. Thus, most of the students are not able to find their interests, and they are not getting satisfied with their lives. For example, currently, big data is a growing trend in silicon valley and the jobs are very demanding so students aren't even knowing anything about big data and its theories, just for good job sake they are pursuing that area of study. The above example will they why there is important to study various different courses. They will get another chance to find their interest and skill if the universities provide them the opportunity to study other fields of courses.
Further, even if we assume that students are interested in a particular field, they are not able to study their interest because of family pressures or any other personal problems. So, if students really get to study different courses, they can change their career to their interesting choice and can be able to build a successful career. For instance, if a student is passionate about computer science which he couldn’t get the course he hoped for, he opts for another course which will be very dissatisfying for him/her. The chance of learning other courses will enlighten them for their future scope.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, thus, for example, for instance, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 291.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95189003436 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55026811444 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522336769759 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5251972959 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.846153846 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142261821723 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543218447871 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450514309665 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113459169359 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283836572864 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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