Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
A person to be successful in this scenario does not require to be perfect in a specific field rather one must have an overall development. Every student has different capabilities and taking up variety of courses outside student's field of study will help him to determine what kind of career they want to pursue. It will help oneself to access his potential and in what they are best, but one must not be compelled to take up courses outside the student's field of study if they are not interested.
A flexibility must be provided to the students so that they can do what they really require. If, a person who has the potential to be the best in a particular sport is made to take up the course which he may not like would not help in lifting his career prospective up. There is for sure a need to bring an overall development of the students as the competitive level has increased so much that multiple talents are required for one to survive. Now-a-days companies like to hire those who are average at everything rather than the one who has high knowledge in a particular field and lacks other attributes.
A business man needs to have the various qualities such as team work, leadership, flexibility, to make crucial decision and out of box thinking. These cannot be taught to a person just by providing academic lesson. These can only be imparted to oneself by making him take up different courses like sports, arts etc. One must not be enclosed within four walled room rather he must be provided room to choose what he wants out of the academic box too. This would really help oneself to come to know what is the current trends which are going on around the world and it would provide one to access the current trends and what would be the best thing to do with his career.
A overall development is really essential for one to succeed in their lives but the choice must be provided. The requirement of a company has evolved and so one must have different talents to compete at this higher competitive level and if one does not have a overall development at least one must have in depth knowledge of a particular area else one will perish in this competitive world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... will help him to determine what kind of career they want to pursue. It will help...
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Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t they can do what they really require. If, a person who has the potential to be t...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
... the best thing to do with his career. A overall development is really essential...
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Line 6, column 150, Rule ID: AND_SO_ONE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'and so on' (="etc.")?
Suggestion: and so on
...he requirement of a company has evolved and so one must have different talents to compete ...
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Line 6, column 258, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...petitive level and if one does not have a overall development at least one must h...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'at least', 'kind of', 'of course', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.169491525424 0.240241500013 71% => OK
Verbs: 0.198547215496 0.157235817809 126% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0992736077482 0.0880659088768 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0484261501211 0.0497285424764 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0411622276029 0.0444667217837 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.106537530266 0.12292977631 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0387409200969 0.0406280797675 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54434713897 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0556900726392 0.030933414821 180% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0121065375303 0.0016655270985 727% => OK
Determiners: 0.0944309927361 0.0997080785238 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.046004842615 0.0249443105267 184% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0266343825666 0.0148568991511 179% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2174.0 2732.02544248 80% => OK
No of words: 392.0 452.878318584 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54591836735 6.0361032391 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.295918367347 0.366273622748 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.224489795918 0.280924506359 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.140306122449 0.200843997647 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.094387755102 0.132149295362 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54434713897 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 219.290929204 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451530612245 0.48968727796 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.7673934296 55.4138127331 86% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.380412469 120% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1169291588 59.4972553346 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.285714286 141.124799967 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 23.380412469 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.674092028746 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 50.4489795918 51.4728631049 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.09243697479 1.64882698954 66% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279992701349 0.391690518653 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.127327981332 0.123202303941 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.102941728875 0.077325440228 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.575337675154 0.547984918172 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144758016102 0.149214159877 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120307295776 0.161403998019 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926231530038 0.0892212321368 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.389738437 0.385218514788 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0809690649025 0.0692045440612 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197769343962 0.275328986314 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101249703418 0.0653680567796 155% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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