Nowadays education plays a big role in individual’s life. People pursuing degrees in order to specialize in some major, get a job and become professionals. However, some suggest that universities should force students to take courses outside of the student’s field of study. Personally, I disagree with that position because it would bring more damage to person’s knowledge and education that it would bring benefits.
In general, it is quite understandable why such opinion exist and how it looks attractive to some people. Taking variety of courses outside of major field of study for sure broaden intelligence and may help in building a well-educated individual in many respects. It is always interesting to talk with a person that knows a lot about our world, history, art, have some science knowledge as well.
However, university are primarily designated to building a professional in a particular field of study. Students are admitted for a not so long period of time in which they are trying to get courses which most likely will provide them a good job. Thus, I do not agree that requiring students to take courses outside theirs field of study is a good decision, as it will take away time and possibilities from getting better in major field of study. For instance, if I was required to take a history course, would it make me a better statistician? Probably not. It would help me to broaden my overall knowledge, but I was pursuing degree in statistic and my primarily goal was to become a good statistician, not a history expert.
In addition, I would like to remind that society already have an institution where people are receiving knowledge in a lot of fields of study. It is school. Pupils there are required to take a lot of courses with a completely different subjects. Thus forcing universities to do so will make them be more like a general schools and this is not the goal universities pursue. However, if a student is willing to take some additional courses outside major, university can provide such opportunity to educate oneself, but without hurting his or her main purpose of entering educational institution.
Overall, I think that the recommendation is not as good as it may look as it may decrease the value of university education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...Students are admitted for a not so long period of time in which they are trying to get courses...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ease the value of university education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, thus, well, as to, for instance, i think, in addition, in general, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 383.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96605744125 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05289264831 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503916449086 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5678828089 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2777777778 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258132404291 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751000326967 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856096878074 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130181791415 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069778994188 0.0667264976115 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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