Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying.

Universities are the place where we can learn a lot of things with good care and in specific direction. One should study in their interested field to become successful in their life despite other bardenings. This is important for all to study or give effort where they interested are passionate about.

Nowadays most of the universities have some course that are not directly related to the specific subject. Those course are called non major subject. Those might seem to important to course because some might seem related to the subject. But those couse is not effective to all. Most of those course are tought in our earlier stage of education. Besides those courses helps a little to understant a those specific subject. In many times this is just waste of time.

In some country like third world countries, there are limited field to study. For this reason there are limited seats to study in a well renown universities. Considering this fact, a student didn't get the opportunities to study in his or her interested subjuet. Moreover, in lower level like undergraduate level they hardly know about anything about any specific topic or subject, sometimes they get confused where they are interested because of lack of information and proper guideline. So this is a hard thing to do for them.

Dispite all those problem, student should study in there interested subject because if they don'y do that thay might lose interest in the middle as a process. Some student mght be passionate about any specific topic. Without that subject often they lose their hope. If einstein didn't study physics he might not be sucessful.

Above all, all the students should study in theis interested subject if they get propper opportunities and backup to prosper in their life. In this way they can success in their field very easyly.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'fields'?
Suggestion: fields
...hird world countries, there are limited field to study. For this reason there are lim...
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Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ities. Considering this fact, a student didnt get the opportunities to study in his o...
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Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'those problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; those problems
...rd thing to do for them. Dispite all those problem, student should study in there interest...
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Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hat subject often they lose their hope. If einstein didnt study physics he might n...
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Line 7, column 278, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...often they lose their hope. If einstein didnt study physics he might not be sucessful...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, moreover, so, third, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 307.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97068403909 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56551003061 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508143322476 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3616859877 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6666666667 118.986275619 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.619047619 23.4991977007 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.04761904762 5.21951772744 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269986808431 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081640236378 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565936555506 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157513441401 0.150359130593 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251235654386 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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