Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view?

We live with nature and environment rather than nature or environment live with us. It is impossible to think about human civilization without our surroundings. So, to survive in the way we have to cope with nature. Thus, nature such as birds, animals, insects, bacteria, viruses, trees or environment such as air, water, soil are much important as much as humans.

In Biology, there is a term called 'Chain of Food' which means each and every living thing on the earth depend on each other for food and survival. For instance, trees make food with the help of the sun, water and some elements in the air, cow eats tree, Cow is eaten by humans and sometimes human become food for tiger or something like that. Then when a tiger dies the body of tiger decomposed by bacteria which is essential elements for trees. so each one demands to another. For that if we build housing industry without thinking other animals specially endangered animal, the ecosystem will surely fail.

Global warming is a major problem nowadays. We are responsible for global warming, climate change, greenhouse effect such kind of hazardous matters. By those means, we are polluting the environment and our inhumanity act is responsible for extinction for those endangered animals. Many kinds of birds are no more in the world anymore. We must look after those endangered animals as we are responsible for their death/ extinct.

If human only get busy only for themselves by destroying the forest, cutting trees continuously, and polluting environment and left no space for animals, then one day for sure those animals will be gone forever.

In conclusion, I think it is important for people to take care of those species as long we survive.

Votes
Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 446, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... which is essential elements for trees. so each one demands to another. For that i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, thus, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 291.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94845360825 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63389900706 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573883161512 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1341559593 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262500842839 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802105276165 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056148071579 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14552707051 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268007086463 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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