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The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and s

Essay topics: The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

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There is no doubt that a well informed society contributes to a healthy nation. We ive in a world where almost all the countries are democratic. Right to express opinion and views forms the essential crux of democracy.The main difference between other forms of government and democracy is that the people also take part in the process which is rightly described as 'by the people', 'of the people' and 'for the people'.
Thus the common subjects question the authority forms the basis of the government.

Realistically speaking, we are all human beings and we have personal desires but a person in power should not have any personal agendas or motives. In the contemporary world we come across many politicians succumbing to corruption and involving in many scams. The consequences of these are borne by thousands of innocent civilians.If the person in highest position is venal,then the masses who elected them should have all the right to questiion them. This will ensure a check in the functioning of the government. Otherwise, everything will go haywire and out of control which can have serious effects of ruining the entire country.
Let us take example of country ruled under dictatorship,or monarchy like Pakistan. The citizens of the country suffer from the autonomous rule imposedon them without their will. There is no freedom for expressing their views.
Statisticaly speaking, countries that involve it's people in the decision making process like the USA, UK, India etc.. outform other nations where people have little say in them.Afterall, the people in power are public servants,thus they have to work for the betterment of the society. To do that, they should understand theey have to listen to their demands and needs.

There are tens of example where a scandulous politician have been sent to prison because the public raised their voice. In India, various scams have come into limelight only because of the common mass decided to question the authority. French revolution happened because the ruler did not listen to the people's voice and in turn they decided to take actions on their own. So many kingdoms have vanished in single night because their supercilious attitude.

In conclusion, it is very important to take the public's opinion to account. However, the people should also understand that they have chosen their leaders and questioning their every move may cause harm and affect them. For instance, the demonetization move by the Indian Prime minister, shocked the entire world and many opposed it but after a while when they understood the real motive behind it, people started supporting it. In reality, many of the decisions made by the people in power may look hazy and blur and outright stupid. It is absolutely fine if the public is wary of it. But, they should analyse and understand the real reason behind those moves by the government before making any big opposing view because the ultimate victim is going to be the common man.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2485.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 491.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06109979633 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68198953951 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 215.323595506 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533604887984 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 777.6 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9126676704 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.64 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132759792693 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352332814759 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261484605003 0.0758088955206 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0608137270327 0.150359130593 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305206312183 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 100.480337079 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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