The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority?
Society, where many people live together. In order to maintain the fabric of society it is often
recommended that the residents of the society need to be outspoken and should counter the
government officials. I agree with the aforesaid statement and believe that more the societies
engage with the authorities the more it prospers, which will be discussed in the essay.
The authority is a responsible institute for the betterment of the society and is also responsible for
any mischiefs happen. Hence, the role of authority is to maintain the proper functioning of the area
as well as facilitating it with proper infrastructure and security. This marks how imperative are these
government officials for the wellbeing of people. Therefore, it is pivotal to examine the functioning
of this institute as these official holds great power and money which they are supposed to utilize in
favour of the citizen however, if they misuse the power, it may have detrimental impact on the
society. For instance, the police authority instead of guarding the rules and maintaining the law they
might become victim of corruption and deviate from the duty hence, in such case powerful residents
of the society undermined the weaker sections of the society which is menacing for the fabric of
society. Therefore, these officials need to be questioned publicly for their every action which will
definitely put a strict watch on the activities of these officials and compelled them to adhere rightful
duty.
The cross-questioning and rigorously asking the questions to responsible authority is not only
beneficial for the society but for the authority also. To put it in another way, consider an example of
Palampur village, where people were facing commuting problem and wanted the officials to widen
the width of the road in order to curtail the traffic congestion while, the authority was not in a
situation to execute this plan because of renumeration shortage hence, when questioned by the
society about the hinderance in the project, officials informed them about money shortage and
therefore, villagers collected the required amount which mitigated the remuneration problem and
the construction project was executed. This questioning method was helpful for both parties hence,
it should be practised by all the society in order to know the shortcomings and need to sort it out
with collective effort.
The questioning helps the society in understanding the functioning of the government institution
and make them well informed about each institution duty which indirectly benefits the residents of
the society. In other words, when society question about the government working either by publicly
posting the query on government website or by filling the form of Right to Information, they are
informed about the limitations and responsibility of the particular authority. For instance, a decade
ago, policemen of the small district called Gazipur used to penalized the rider by demanding 50rs
cash though, the amount was penury but, in the end, they would collect handsome amount. One
day, a rider filled the ROI form and questioned the senior authority about the penalized rule and that
particular day the people got to know that there was not any provision to penalized defaulter by
asking cash rather they should be given warning. Hence, asking the authority enhance the
bureaucratic knowledge and eventually benefits the society.
In conclusion, it is evident for the citizen to collectively involve in the functioning of the government
authority as they are for the betterment of the society.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 20, column 50, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...l for the society but for the authority also. To put it in another way, consider an ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3094.0 2235.4752809 138% => OK
No of words: 574.0 442.535393258 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39024390244 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89472135074 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92706154711 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454703832753 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 972.0 704.065955056 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.056041909 60.3974514979 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.888888889 118.986275619 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8888888889 23.4991977007 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 38.0 4.97078651685 764% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281593993606 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930815617325 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547714302352 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619323229276 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564254003474 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 14.1392134831 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 48.8420337079 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 100.480337079 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 20, column 50, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...l for the society but for the authority also. To put it in another way, consider an ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3094.0 2235.4752809 138% => OK
No of words: 574.0 442.535393258 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39024390244 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89472135074 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92706154711 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454703832753 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 972.0 704.065955056 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.056041909 60.3974514979 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.888888889 118.986275619 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8888888889 23.4991977007 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 38.0 4.97078651685 764% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281593993606 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930815617325 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547714302352 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619323229276 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564254003474 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 14.1392134831 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 48.8420337079 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 100.480337079 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.