The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Many people argue that the public could contribute to the prosperity of the society by questioning the government. Such a statement is plausible to some extent, but if people protest against the authority illegally, it may lead to riots, which will certainly affect people’s daily lives.
Admittedly, being gifted so much control over its people, the government ought to be regulated within its territory. Many governments will abuse the power, which is given by the public, to detriment people’s interests and rights. For example, the Soviet Union once put many intellectuals, who hold the opposite views against the authority, into jail or persecuted them until they promised to stop questioning government policies. As leaders of the Soviet Union have infinite power over its people and media, the crimes they committed were revealed only after the collapse of the Soviet Union. What they did would have been impeded if there’s a comprehensive rebellion mechanism, and thereby diminishing the damage they caused on people.
However, many people are unprofessional when they are challenging government policies. As we all know, almost all the policies are investigated and formed by experts in different areas. For example, an electricity regulation normally requires opinions from economists, ecologists, etc. It is impossible for many ordinary people to have sufficient knowledge to offer effective advices on professional areas. Thus, their protests towards the authority are sometimes ridiculous and meaningless, let alone have the ability to contribute to the well-being of the society.
In addition, if many people gather together to express their indignation to the government, it may result in some irrational behaviours. For example, Many protests will evolve into commotions in the end, thus leading to the loss of personal properties and even innocent lives. This kind of protests certainly have nothing to do with the well-being of the society, but developing the chaos of some places.
In sum, while it is true that government’s power should be limited, it is equally important that people need to acquire more knowledge and behave legally when challenging the authority. Otherwise, it may not achieve the expected results and even undermine the well-being of the society.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'in addition', 'kind of', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237980769231 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.153846153846 0.157235817809 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0721153846154 0.0880659088768 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0528846153846 0.0497285424764 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0432692307692 0.0444667217837 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105769230769 0.12292977631 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0408653846154 0.0406280797675 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.02922056812 2.79330140395 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0360576923077 0.030933414821 117% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.09375 0.0997080785238 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0240384615385 0.0249443105267 96% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0144230769231 0.0148568991511 97% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2315.0 2732.02544248 85% => OK
No of words: 356.0 452.878318584 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.50280898876 6.0361032391 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.426966292135 0.366273622748 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.337078651685 0.280924506359 120% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.26404494382 0.200843997647 131% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.193820224719 0.132149295362 147% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02922056812 2.79330140395 108% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 219.290929204 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.48968727796 119% => OK
Word variations: 67.1210486428 55.4138127331 121% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 20.9411764706 23.380412469 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6102070759 59.4972553346 55% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.176470588 141.124799967 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9411764706 23.380412469 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.705882352941 0.674092028746 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.21349557522 0% => OK
Readability: 54.6490416391 51.4728631049 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.53846153846 1.64882698954 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.497384577706 0.391690518653 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0979747204136 0.123202303941 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0555598241057 0.077325440228 72% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.556087451449 0.547984918172 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144431879052 0.149214159877 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202127325411 0.161403998019 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100943346467 0.0892212321368 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.393961960576 0.385218514788 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.041104484541 0.0692045440612 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.34293473787 0.275328986314 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356862559975 0.0653680567796 55% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.4325221239 29% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.30420353982 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 7.22455752212 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 10.0 3.66592920354 273% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.