"The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authoriy."
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The two pillars of a healthy society are its well being and to what extent this well being is enhanced constantly. The well being, in its turn, comprises of social and financial security. Any society has a tendency to appoint an authority who will be accountable for the welfare of people. Having been appointed, an authority take responsibility for their activities and work on enhancing the well being of denizens of a country. Аs long as people delegate authority to government officials, it is their straight right to question them, as a result.
Once people question authority on their activities, a transparency in what is happening in the country will emerge. Governments collect taxes, receive foreign aid and develop mechanisms to allocate these resources to satisfy a multiplicity of needs. Governments are entrusted vast sums of public money and this can pose a serious corruption risk. By questioning authority on government expenditure, society can help shed light on how country’s taxes are being spent. Such actions from people’s side may enhance the well being of society and expose any abuses in the future.
It is healthy for a society to question authorities. People choose authorities (government officials) by an ability to fullfil imposed demands. Therefore, as long as they make decision in favor of authority to hold their position, they should have a trust, in return. However, in order to enhance their well-being, denizens cannot question authorities all the time. Denizens can question authority on accountability, but should not intervene constantly, because if government officials are questioned continually, they will not have much time on working on their main tasks. A healthy society works best where a majority of its people are in accord with the government.
In a nutshell, questioning authorities will enhance the well being of society due to the transparency between people and government officials, but at times, it is not prudent to do so. Undue intervention may attribute to distrustful relationship and irrational time spending of authorities to concentrate on their main tasks while governing the country.
"The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authoriy
The two pillars of a healthy society are its well being and to what extent this well being is enhanced constantly. The well being, in its turn, comprises of social and financial security. any society has a tendency to appoint an authority who will be accountable for the welfare of people. having been appointed, an authority take responsibility for their activities and work on enhancing the well being of denizens of a country. Аs long as people delegate authority to government officials, it is their straight right to question them, as a result.
Once people question authority on their activities, a transparency in what is happening in the country will emerge. governments collect taxes, receive foreign aid and develop mechanisms to allocate these resources to satisfy a multiplicity of needs. governments are entrusted vast sums of public money and this can pose a serious corruption risk. By questioning authority on government expenditure, society can help shed light on how country’s taxes are being spent. Such actions from people’s side may enhance the well being of society and expose any abuses in the future.
it is healthy for a society to question authorities. people choose authorities (government officials) by an ability to fullfil imposed demands. Therefore, as long as they make decision in favor of authority to hold their position, they should have a trust, in return. However, in order to enhance their well-being, denizens cannot question authorities all the time. denizens can question authority on accountability, but should not intervene constantly, because if government officials are questioned continually, they will not have much time on working on their main tasks. A healthy society works best where a majority of its people are in accord with the government.
In a nutshell, questioning authorities will enhance the well being of society due to the transparency between people and government officials, but at times, it is not prudent to do so. Undue intervention may attribute to distrustful relationship and irrational time spending of authorities to concentrate on their main tasks while governing the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 355.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39718309859 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10825637407 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518309859155 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9067320396 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.444444444 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7222222222 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 7.80617977528 346% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428871460549 0.243740707755 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146249888903 0.0831039109588 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.193348445251 0.0758088955206 255% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329405419947 0.150359130593 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.198674996408 0.0667264976115 298% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.