"While some leaders in government, sports, industry, and other areas attribute their success to a well-developed sense of competition, a society can better prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in them a sense of cooperation."
Today's world is highly competitive in every aspect of life where the survival of fittest is been credo for everyone. Due to high competition teachers, guidance and parents force there child to be highly competitive. But don't forget that in the 21st century the idea of globalization pops out where the distance between countries has been diminished and became one global country. so, I believe that the best way for society to prepare its young people is by instilling a sense of cooperation rather than competition.
For instance in the business world the one of the most important trait for hiring employees skill to cooperate with there peers and work in the team. This is the key descriptions of all the MNCs.Though business is highly competitive these days, no business can survive without the cooperation with other industries.for example if one industry produced certain goods for peoples it might not be able to take his goods to people.so it has to cooperate with logistics industry to continue there productions and make more profits.
Not only in the business world we can see cooperation among nations also. For an instance, one nation has a limited amount of natural sources like coal, oil, but better production of foods and other nation has a limited amount of food production but a large number of fossil fuels then this nation cooperates with each other to satisfy there needs. yes, it is true that back in history powerful countries invaded a poor country to use their resources and fought with another powerfull country for dominating poor nations. But this practice is not found in today's world because everyone knows that resources are limited and the nations have to cooperate with each other to survive.
Not only in business or political worlds but today we can see the cooperation of researchers also where their aim is to find something which can be useful for overall humanity. Almost all countries are part of the united nation (UN). the sole purpose of this cooperating organization is the betterment of humanities. I firmly believe that one should cooperate with others to ensure overall development of the nation and humanity.
In sum, concluding I would like to say the best way for a society to prepare young people for any field is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ere child to be highly competitive. But dont forget that in the 21st century the ide...
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...ld we can see cooperation among nations also. For an instance, one nation has a limi...
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...a limited amount of food production but a large number of fossil fuels then this nation cooperate...
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Suggestion: Yes
...with each other to satisfy there needs. yes, it is true that back in history powerf...
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...evelopment of the nation and humanity. In sum, concluding I would like to say t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, as to, for example, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 392.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96683673469 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73621526177 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517857142857 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.8465739409 60.3974514979 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.8 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1333333333 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174185831933 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665900100599 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891293763943 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125855036046 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867347660806 0.0667264976115 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.