Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and reason on which that claim is based.
Claim: The best way to understand the character of society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role model.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
Heroes and role models are chosen by the society. Society makes someone as a hero or a role model by looking at the qualities possessed by him/her. To be a hero or a role model is not someone's wish, but society decides who they want to see as a hero or a role model. Hence, one can say that the best way to understand the character of society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its hero or its role model as heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
First of all, society has the right of deciding a hero or a role model. Heroes and role models are the ideals of society. Society desires to be like them. For example, Dr. APJ Abdul Kalam, one of the greatest scientists and former president of India is a role model of many people because what he has achieved in his life is a great inspiration for others. People admire him. Many young scientists follow their footsteps in order to achieve their goals. Thus, heroes and role models are the people who society wants to become like.
Furthermore, heroes and role models have the power of influencing the society. Any word or sentence said by the hero or role model has a huge impact on the people who follow him. For instance, Adolf Hitler, a ruler of Germany was a demagogue, who created aversion in the hearts of people towards one another which ultimately lead to World War II. Thus, the character of heroes and role models has a high influence on society, and society’s character can be judged by the character of heroes and role models.
In addition to that, heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals. Heroes and role models are people who possess idealistic nature. For example, Sachin Tendulkar, one of the best cricketers of India, is treated as the God of cricket. The way he plays acts as a great motivation for many young cricketers. Therefore, heroes and role models reveal society's highest ideals.
To sum up, from the above discussion one can say that, the best way to understand the character of society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role model as heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 399.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54887218045 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40380015012 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.390977443609 0.4932671777 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.5848967736 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4285714286 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103974966239 0.243740707755 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370091099417 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552543517165 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860789454785 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587265386017 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 14.1392134831 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.1639044944 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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