Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition.
I disagree with the Author claim that young people should be encouraged to pursuing long term goals rather than immediate fame and recognition. Which I will explain in detail with help of the illustrations. Firstly, there are great gifted young artists and young prodigies are there. We shall encourage them to pursue their talent. While pursuing their talent they might get famous and recognise, but instead of telling them to make a career plan and focus on long term goals, they should grab the opportunity and make the most out of it. Nowadays many singers get early recognition through social media and get famous. While doing that they might get approached by many musical talent seekers. If they gave up that opportunity and wait till according to the long term plan then they might never get such an opportunity to pursue their dream and their talent might never get the recognition they deserve Therefore, it is always wise to grab the opportunity when it presents itself. Further, I will add that while pursuing the talent in the public eye
It will get more enhanced. The young people will learn about the dos and don’t in their respective industries early on. They will get correct guidance to pursue enhance their knowledge. It is in the news about the young science prodigy. Who now gets to work with his ideals and prominent figures in the field. That young boy is learning so much from world-class talent rather than still from his local schools who have a limited number of resources and his talent is getting the recognition it deserves This is happening due to his unique science experience got famous. I will further add that due to early exposers in their field they get more options to try out and select the one. They get more time to explore the desired field. Some young mart prodigies are happy with not going through their mundane life and get to do some exciting early on rather than in the distant future. Also, Some prodigies prefer to work at a young age and then taking early retirement and work towards the betterment of humanity. Authors claim about young people making long term, realistic goals are correct in terms of many talents that might not get recognition. And young people might lose their childhood while waiting for such opportunities. Also while chasing these opportunities there are chances that young people will get attracted to the wrong part of the field as sometimes we see child actors is doing substance abuse. Therefore, young people shall follow their dreams and opportunities but at the same time be cautious of their surroundings and it nit gets affected theirare moral values.
To sum up it up I will say that young people if their talent get recognise and opportunities present themselves then should not shy away from fame and recognition To sum up it up I will say that young people if their talent get recognise and opportunities present themselves then should not shy away from fame and recognition
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, still, then, therefore, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 33.0505617978 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2470.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 509.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85265225933 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74984508646 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48535452599 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442043222004 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 734.4 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.7384037409 60.3974514979 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.391304348 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1304347826 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26086956522 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275886160051 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906890694052 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127292428577 0.0758088955206 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201245542951 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501580211143 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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